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Her Painting

She once painted a picture of a girl who wanted to fly, Jumped right off the canvas and took to the sky. Her brush nothing fancy just a dull chipped blade, nothing more to do now than watch her paint the page. She's an artist... Ink swims through her veins. She could paint forever because she controls the pain. She's a natural, watch the way the canvas comes to life. peels itself from the fabric as the blood begins to dry.. its beautiful, sickeningly so. looks just like water color as the paint starts to flow. relief crawls over her skin as her painting takes its shape, blurring at the edges and her hands begin to shake.. She's dizzy now and her painting begins to fade, this is her masterpiece and shes no longer afraid. She's ready, it all started with a paintbrush, a simple dull chipped blade.. nothing left to do now. Just to clean the mess she made.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 2/8/2018 3:41:00 PM
Thank you. I appreciate the input everyone and thank you for welcoming me to the site :)
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Date: 2/8/2018 12:06:00 PM
deep in the darkness....it is difficult to find the harness....where there is hope for the pain to end....in the heart is where the search must begin....but how do you heal that which is broken....find something to Love, the heart must stay open....very sad piece yet Beautifully constructed wendy....;)
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Date: 12/29/2017 2:09:00 PM
Great use of metaphor, excellent poem..
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Date: 12/29/2017 10:11:00 AM
A lovely write! Love your usage of assonance...with long a sounds throughout! Really loved the images! Fave, Wendy!
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