Her Nibs

Day in, and day out, from the ripe old age of five
I’ve take to sharp objects and whittled at their sides.

Plotting the precise angle with penetrating gaze,
the slant of slice, just so nice, as memory replays.

With curt tongue and tireless ire, I shred the sages
Burroughs, and Asimov, the Shakespeare past ages.

Butchering with rare delight, the language on the page
lancing every metaphor and simile upstaged.

and so I've arrived her in rhythm and in rhyme  
killing the English language as other people dine.





*Nibbs are the pointed ends of fountain pens
as well as being an important or self-important person
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Arana Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 4:56 AM
Your pen works so well. Congratulations, Debbie.>> Norma
Mehta Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 4:45 AM
Congratulations on the fine win. Enjoyed the rhyme perfect, debbie
Walker  Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 1:39 AM
Congratulations on the win Debbie... Verlena
Onclaud Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 1:37 AM
a poetic delight, debbie.. cheers to you on your win!.. huggs
Kayode Avatar
March 8, 2014 at 9:26 PM
A great work indeed,congrats Debbie.
Johnson Avatar
March 8, 2014 at 5:06 PM
Congratulations Debbie. Love Joyce
A  Avatar
March 8, 2014 at 4:34 PM
congrats...SKAT
Michelle Avatar
March 8, 2014 at 3:40 PM
interesting subject matter. I see this poem is already a winner. Good. Congratulations on your place win in my contest. You deserve it :) -Juli-Michelle
Lane Avatar
October 29, 2011 at 2:50 PM
Congratulations on your win Debbie. Tony
Seraphin Avatar
October 28, 2011 at 10:10 AM
* “There Is A Wonderful & Intriguing Quality About Your Gifted & Lovely Beauty Debbie * Stimulates The Heart & Stirs The Soul * I Love It * An Artist Divine Within Progressive & Unique * Luv * Sarah.” *
Susan Avatar
October 26, 2011 at 11:01 AM
Congratulations on your win in my contest! very creative take on the theme - I really enjoyed your butchering stanza and how you contrasted it with people eating in the last stanza. comical :)
Brown Avatar
October 26, 2011 at 5:57 AM
Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Getting Away with Murder" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
October 24, 2011 at 9:09 PM
Congrats Debbie on a super second place win with this fascinating entry luv..
Arowolo Avatar
October 24, 2011 at 4:36 PM
Awesome write,good imagery.well done Debbie.Congrats on your win....great poet...
Johnson Avatar
October 14, 2011 at 8:16 PM
Of course you do catch the words n the rhyme, and on the train get carriages behind, and you do us proud mos all of the time, you see! Maybe Psychic types get to be visited by ufos just like the Ghosties come visit too, some might say his imagination just flew, who knows/knew....orright
Wesley Avatar
October 12, 2011 at 3:04 PM
Well your butchering comes with style and always a smile. A true poet who seem to know it and I'll enjoy it awhile! Luv, Elizabeth
Dietrich Avatar
October 11, 2011 at 4:11 PM
Eloquently comical, Debs!! LUv, Andrea
Maverick Avatar
October 11, 2011 at 2:39 AM
Dear Debbie, have sent you soup mail..
Sapp Avatar
October 11, 2011 at 12:26 AM
Ah, the joys of dissection! Love it, Debbie! Wayne
Smith Avatar
October 10, 2011 at 11:02 PM
You're killing us softly with your lines. Great lines
Smith Avatar
October 10, 2011 at 7:53 PM
love this
Onclaud Avatar
October 10, 2011 at 6:42 PM
SOUP MAIL
Maverick Avatar
October 10, 2011 at 4:53 PM
They are also found on roof tiles Debbie, anyway i sooo enjoyed the write... i did something similar:) in my book of which Carolyn brought a copy, you know..! i can't call the title to mind..oh well its been a long day.......zzzzzzzzzz.
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