Her Nibs

Day in, and day out, from the ripe old age of five
I’ve take to sharp objects and whittled at their sides.

Plotting the precise angle with penetrating gaze,
the slant of slice, just so nice, as memory replays.

With curt tongue and tireless ire, I shred the sages
Burroughs, and Asimov, the Shakespeare past ages.

Butchering with rare delight, the language on the page
lancing every metaphor and simile upstaged.

and so I've arrived her in rhythm and in rhyme  
killing the English language as other people dine.





*Nibbs are the pointed ends of fountain pens
as well as being an important or self-important person

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/10/2014 4:56:00 AM
Your pen works so well. Congratulations, Debbie.>> Norma
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Date: 3/9/2014 4:45:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine win. Enjoyed the rhyme perfect, debbie
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Date: 3/9/2014 1:39:00 AM
Congratulations on the win Debbie... Verlena
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Date: 3/9/2014 1:37:00 AM
a poetic delight, debbie.. cheers to you on your win!.. huggs
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Date: 3/8/2014 9:26:00 PM
A great work indeed,congrats Debbie.
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Date: 3/8/2014 5:06:00 PM
Congratulations Debbie. Love Joyce
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Date: 3/8/2014 4:34:00 PM
congrats...SKAT
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Date: 3/8/2014 3:40:00 PM
interesting subject matter. I see this poem is already a winner. Good. Congratulations on your place win in my contest. You deserve it :) -Juli-Michelle
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Date: 10/29/2011 2:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Debbie. Tony
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Date: 10/28/2011 10:10:00 AM
* “There Is A Wonderful & Intriguing Quality About Your Gifted & Lovely Beauty Debbie * Stimulates The Heart & Stirs The Soul * I Love It * An Artist Divine Within Progressive & Unique * Luv * Sarah.” *
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Date: 10/26/2011 11:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in my contest! very creative take on the theme - I really enjoyed your butchering stanza and how you contrasted it with people eating in the last stanza. comical :)
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Date: 10/26/2011 5:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Getting Away with Murder" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/24/2011 9:09:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on a super second place win with this fascinating entry luv..
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Date: 10/24/2011 4:36:00 PM
Awesome write,good imagery.well done Debbie.Congrats on your win....great poet...
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Date: 10/14/2011 8:16:00 PM
Of course you do catch the words n the rhyme, and on the train get carriages behind, and you do us proud mos all of the time, you see! Maybe Psychic types get to be visited by ufos just like the Ghosties come visit too, some might say his imagination just flew, who knows/knew....orright
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Date: 10/12/2011 3:04:00 PM
Well your butchering comes with style and always a smile. A true poet who seem to know it and I'll enjoy it awhile! Luv, Elizabeth
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Date: 10/11/2011 4:11:00 PM
Eloquently comical, Debs!! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/11/2011 2:39:00 AM
Dear Debbie, have sent you soup mail..
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Date: 10/11/2011 12:26:00 AM
Ah, the joys of dissection! Love it, Debbie! Wayne
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Date: 10/10/2011 11:02:00 PM
You're killing us softly with your lines. Great lines
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Date: 10/10/2011 7:53:00 PM
love this
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Date: 10/10/2011 6:42:00 PM
SOUP MAIL
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Date: 10/10/2011 4:53:00 PM
They are also found on roof tiles Debbie, anyway i sooo enjoyed the write... i did something similar:) in my book of which Carolyn brought a copy, you know..! i can't call the title to mind..oh well its been a long day.......zzzzzzzzzz.
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