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Her New Day

For the woman the world had turned a huge and restless black night The trees of mango stood at her window looking like black skeletons Though the time was for the flowers to be in its deep green threshold For its fulfillment into the mighty flavour of deliciously dulcet freedom Her newly-born baby was missing from the hospital's maternity ward The whole hospital got into a tizzy over the said child lifting incident With more and more intense gloom gathering over the petrified bed Sat a still statue of black stone from starless dark and dense night Assurance found no soil in the stone to come out in a green sprout Milk filled gentle breast kept crying in the core of unsatiated desire In the dead of night a nurse came close to the bed in a tempest of void The one day old baby smiled like jasmine held in her arms like a swing The police recovered him from a nearby six storied apartment complex A childless woman had stolen the baby to quench her thirst for warmth The new day snatched from the new mom was thus given back to her In the very dark night the mother shimmered in the emerging warm sun This gradually turned into the morning glory of tuberose in a bush of joy Cherry and chocolate larks came hopping in the new day's golden face In the middle of sobbing night the new day opened the door of ecstasy She told all that she had never had such a seagull like new day before __________________________________________________________ 18 March,2017

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Date: 4/8/2017 6:07:00 AM
Greetings, Probir. I really enjoyed your piece!! Congrats for having it placed in the contest!! ;-)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/9/2017 7:16:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 4/1/2017 2:46:00 AM
Very well done, Probir, congratulations on your win ~*
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Date: 4/1/2017 10:14:00 AM
Thank you, Eve ...
Date: 3/19/2017 9:58:00 PM
Probir, a good story with a good ending. I love your use of colors, flavors, physical sensations... : )
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Date: 3/20/2017 6:48:00 AM
Thank you, Doug ...
Date: 3/18/2017 4:41:00 PM
Well done, Probir, interesting but it has happen.... ~*
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/19/2017 5:33:00 AM
Thank you, Eve ...
Date: 3/18/2017 3:41:00 PM
Very inspirational poem, Probir. A joy to read happy endings. It was like the title suggested two births. The mother was reborn w/joy and answered prayers of faith. And of course, the birth of the infant baby boy. Outstanding emotional poem, my friend. Love and peace to you.
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Date: 3/19/2017 5:34:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 3/18/2017 9:13:00 AM
The worst nightmare of a mother to have her child stolen. What a relief my friend the child to be found which is not always the case! A marvelous poem so vivid and captivating! A seven my friend, Probir! I would like to relate a funny story that took place here in Greece! The lady gave birth to a boy and when the time came to take him to her house she found out they gave her a girl! Fortunately all ended well! haha!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/18/2017 9:49:00 AM
The incident you mention happens here too ... Thank you for your comments ...

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