Her Most Beautiful Curve

Michelle fell for a guy named Mikhail
Whose imagination is so fertile
She felt greatly loved
As she has been told
That her most beautiful curve was her smile.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Agustin Avatar
May 22, 2024 at 12:00 AM
I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 12, 2016 at 11:33 PM
FADI, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
Andresen Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 5:18 AM
- A lovely limerick, Fadi !! - Hope spring has come to Turkey (my beautiful vacation country) - I wish you a beautiful day - // Anne-Lise :)
Mathew Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 5:15 PM
Thanks for your nice comment Anne! Spring has not come to Turkey yet, since it's still so cold. Wish you nice day as well. Fadi :)
Deschler Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 9:13 PM
This is a lovely poem, especially that last line. Very nicely written, Fadi!
Mathew Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 5:17 PM
Thank you Kelly for your visit .. your opinion means a lot to me :)
Vaso Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 9:08 PM
What a beautiful sentiment and poem!
Mathew Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 5:21 PM
Thank you Arthur so much for your comment and constant support.
Nunez Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 7:25 AM
...cute! I bet Michelle has many other curves...but the guy certainly knows how to make a girl smile!!! 7 for a good lim, my friend. :)
Mathew Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 7:50 AM
Yes, Kim! She does have many other curves, but for Mikhail , her smile is his favorite one :) Thanks my friend for your constant encouragement, for helping me get my simple poems more beautiful and for your 7!
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