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fragile heart shattered sun illuminates pieces diamonds are revealed

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Date: 7/13/2019 9:44:00 AM
Lovely images
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Date: 11/7/2018 5:46:00 PM
Hi Richard, a beautiful Haiku from your talented pen. In so few words you encompass your thought. This is a diamond in the rough my friend, a poetic gem. Your heart sings, whatever the emotions portrayed. Have a wonderful Thursday. your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 12/25/2017 2:00:00 PM
a not so rough gem
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Date: 12/7/2017 12:09:00 AM
This is so beautiful!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/7/2017 8:09:00 AM
Thanks Afzal.
Date: 11/23/2017 7:07:00 AM
Short and sweet, Richard, love how you brought about that positive line in heartbreak...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/23/2017 7:45:00 AM
Thanks Jo for all your visits this morning.
Date: 11/15/2017 3:21:00 PM
wow, what a great third line for this one, Richard! Love it.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/18/2017 4:01:00 PM
Thanks Andrea.
Date: 11/14/2017 7:35:00 AM
I love how you brought it to a positive level. Beautiful Haiku :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/15/2017 8:18:00 AM
Thanks Heidi.
Date: 11/14/2017 7:00:00 AM
Lovely haiku!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/15/2017 8:18:00 AM
Thanks Vijay.
Date: 11/13/2017 11:31:00 PM
Beautiful, albeit sad. Richard...why do hearts have to break? Are the diamonds worth the break. This beautiful piece suggests that they are....Lovely
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/14/2017 8:40:00 AM
I haven't written a short piece in a while so I thought I'd give it a go.
Date: 11/13/2017 9:51:00 PM
Very contemplative Haiku, I love how you went from one direction to the other in only 3 lines.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/14/2017 8:39:00 AM
Thanks Arthur.;0)
Date: 11/13/2017 6:08:00 PM
So much said, so much wisdom, in just a few words! Remarkable haiku.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/13/2017 6:19:00 PM
Thanks Sunlite, how appropriate that you should comment.;0)
Date: 11/13/2017 6:01:00 PM
you portray heartbreak so superbly in so few lines Richard:-( hugs jan x
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/13/2017 6:20:00 PM
Thanks for the hug and visit Jan.

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