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Richard Lamoureux

Her Many Facets

fragile heart shattered
sun illuminates pieces
diamonds are revealed

Copyright © Richard Lamoureux | Year Posted 2017

heartbrokenhaiku

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Georgia Kereopa

July 13, 2019 at 9:44 AM

Lovely images

Vladislav Raven

November 7, 2018 at 5:46 PM

Hi Richard, a beautiful Haiku from your talented pen. In so few words you encompass your thought. This is a diamond in the rough my friend, a poetic gem. Your heart sings, whatever the emotions portrayed. Have a wonderful Thursday. your friend always....Mike.

December 25, 2017 at 2:00 PM

a not so rough gem

December 7, 2017 at 12:09 AM

This is so beautiful!!

Richard Lamoureux

December 7, 2017 at 8:09 AM

Thanks Afzal.

November 23, 2017 at 7:07 AM

Short and sweet, Richard, love how you brought about that positive line in heartbreak...

Richard Lamoureux

November 23, 2017 at 7:45 AM

Thanks Jo for all your visits this morning.

Andrea Dietrich

November 15, 2017 at 3:21 PM

wow, what a great third line for this one, Richard! Love it.

Richard Lamoureux

November 18, 2017 at 4:01 PM

Thanks Andrea.

November 14, 2017 at 7:35 AM

I love how you brought it to a positive level. Beautiful Haiku :)

Richard Lamoureux

November 15, 2017 at 8:18 AM

Thanks Heidi.

November 14, 2017 at 7:00 AM

Lovely haiku!

Richard Lamoureux

November 15, 2017 at 8:18 AM

Thanks Vijay.

Eileen Manassian

November 13, 2017 at 11:31 PM

Beautiful, albeit sad. Richard...why do hearts have to break? Are the diamonds worth the break. This beautiful piece suggests that they are....Lovely

Richard Lamoureux

November 14, 2017 at 8:40 AM

I haven't written a short piece in a while so I thought I'd give it a go.

November 13, 2017 at 9:51 PM

Very contemplative Haiku, I love how you went from one direction to the other in only 3 lines.

Richard Lamoureux

November 14, 2017 at 8:39 AM

Thanks Arthur.;0)

November 13, 2017 at 6:08 PM

So much said, so much wisdom, in just a few words! Remarkable haiku.

Richard Lamoureux

November 13, 2017 at 6:19 PM

Thanks Sunlite, how appropriate that you should comment.;0)

November 13, 2017 at 6:01 PM

you portray heartbreak so superbly in so few lines Richard:-( hugs jan x

Richard Lamoureux

November 13, 2017 at 6:20 PM

Thanks for the hug and visit Jan.

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