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Her Love 'Pon Mine Tongue

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                        Fondle like
                           Fondue
                       her love ‘pon
                       mine tongue
                 to match its warmth
                      I dare not do

                         Elizabeth
                     Poe loved you
                        as I could

                       For the one
                    stuck south sea

                         blankets
                        warm feet
                          and tea

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 7/20/2012 7:04:00 PM

Mmmmm, so cozy, such warmth; I hold on to the moment.

Marty Owens

Date: 12/3/2009 6:52:00 PM

Very nice....Enjoyed...Marty

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/24/2009 2:39:00 PM

I came back to put this gem in my favz,,a gem indeed,James!!!Charma

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/24/2009 12:22:00 AM

This poem is a unique fondue fondled with strawberry verses,I can picture it ,a cosy blanket,some tea,and melted chocolate Fondue,,Yummy,and feet too for the one stucked at sea..guess thats a treasure:)So sweet indeed,Regarding Elizabeth Poe,She was a great lady indeed..and a one of the best poets are you,You are being mused again and i love it...excellent work James--Charma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/23/2009 9:11:00 PM

I think I know where this is coming from after our discussion the other day, James, and I must say it's wondeful! You never cease to amaze me, dear. Love you, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/23/2009 8:38:00 PM

Sounds quite cozy indeed.. so aptly put by your pen, James.. luv your title too.. a lyric filled with wondering ... enjoyed... luv and happy turkey day ... 2 u ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Marty Owens

Date: 11/23/2009 8:14:00 PM

nice poem...enjoyed...Marty