Red Fiery Poet Free verse

Her Love Climaxed

Her crimson lips begged for a kiss
The lost love that she could reminisce. ..

The silver moon had once witnessed the romance 
Infinite passion and foreplay at a glance 

Her love climaxed 
In the glimmering twilight

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Robert Lindley May 25, 2016 at 9:36 AM So much romance in such few words my friend. "Her love climaxed In the glimmering twilight" ^^^^^^^pure gold!!!! Super 7.....

James Inman April 30, 2016 at 7:24 PM Fiery indeed Red, but I think rather sad; perhaps, the next time her passion will climax and her love will continue to grow and she will have no need to reminisce lost love. Nice write.

Charlie Smith March 28, 2016 at 11:13 PM I had to go back and check out my new inspirations work. Wow! Which one is the sequel? And I thought your name was for the hair. Wrong! Sensually sultry. Well done...

Poet Tacito March 26, 2016 at 2:53 PM MASSIVE GOOSEBUMPS!!!!!!!! Ah, the power of the moonlight...releasing the true colors from us all. Strong stuff.

John-Ovan.P. Hull March 12, 2016 at 10:25 AM Proof if ever it were needed that great things come in small packages, it would be great to read a few more verses tho. Red Fiery March 20, 2016 at 8:25 AM Thank you Johny....:)

Laura Leiser March 10, 2016 at 9:47 PM With a few well chosen words you have penned a passionate romantic poem! Well done :)

Richard Lamoureux March 9, 2016 at 7:26 PM Dropping by to say hi. Hugs Rick. Red Fiery March 9, 2016 at 7:50 PM It's always gr8 to see you here( my small kingdom welcomes you )

Brian Mcclain March 9, 2016 at 1:04 PM Hi Red, Very impassioned write, as per usual. Nicely done! Oh, maybe you shoulda entered this in the United Colours Red contest! Cheers, Brian Red Fiery March 9, 2016 at 7:49 PM Thank you Brian! Cheers to you ...!

Nette Onclaud March 9, 2016 at 7:49 AM this is a real sizzler and i like how you dealt with the theme in a passionate way, red!..huggs Red Fiery March 9, 2016 at 7:49 PM thanx nette..ur an swesome poetess...

Constance La France March 8, 2016 at 7:57 AM Red, oh you are truly a fiery girl, so sexy and sensual is your write, but it is life and desire, I applaud your bravery to write what is real so beautifully, wonderful and I am loving this 7 ~ Red Fiery March 9, 2016 at 7:48 PM Thank you Broken Wings..!

Daniel Turner March 7, 2016 at 2:12 AM Very hot! may be I better go back to the old folks home. LOL. I see a lot of my contemporaries have already discovered your talent. Peace young lady:) Red Fiery March 7, 2016 at 9:36 PM :)...blushing...

Poet Destroyer A March 6, 2016 at 9:16 PM Hi Red, WOW, hot and steamy... I have a question, are you the her in this poem? ;) Love LINDA Red Fiery March 7, 2016 at 9:37 PM How i wish....*lol*...love and hugs red

Richard Lamoureux March 6, 2016 at 7:17 AM I guess this is what you call a "quickie" I think you have developed a new form.;0) Red Fiery March 6, 2016 at 7:45 AM Hope you liked it !..soupmail

Paul Callus March 6, 2016 at 6:46 AM This is lovely and descriptive with suggestive imagery; remembrance of a passionate romance which appears to be in the past, but still fresh in the mind. You imply a lot in so few words. ~ All the best // paul Red Fiery March 6, 2016 at 7:47 AM Paul, very much fresh in the mind...I will be back with my dream sequence ..

Timothy Hicks March 5, 2016 at 11:23 PM Good brevity. I wonder what else the silver moon has witnessed ... ;) Red Fiery March 5, 2016 at 11:49 PM Maybe everything. ..or maybe this is just a wild imagination. ..;)