Her Love

Sand between my toes—
Tears rushing over my feet
Phosphorescent waves
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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February 9, 2016 at 1:32 AM
J.R. Dawson, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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December 18, 2015 at 9:46 AM
You are very effective with these short forms.
Pettit Avatar
January 21, 2014 at 5:59 PM
On this snowy winter day, this haiku reminds me of summer days at the New Jersey shore. Good write.
Mcdaid Avatar
January 18, 2014 at 9:27 AM
beautifully crafted piece
Mehta Avatar
January 18, 2014 at 8:40 AM
Nicxe images to create a picture, JR
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