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Sand between my toes— Tears rushing over my feet Phosphorescent waves

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/9/2016 1:32:00 AM
J.R. Dawson, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/18/2015 9:46:00 AM
You are very effective with these short forms.
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Date: 1/21/2014 5:59:00 PM
On this snowy winter day, this haiku reminds me of summer days at the New Jersey shore. Good write.
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Date: 1/18/2014 9:27:00 AM
beautifully crafted piece
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Date: 1/18/2014 8:40:00 AM
Nicxe images to create a picture, JR
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