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Some people seem to hide their true selves away, like in a clenched fist, while putting an alt ego forward instead, like in a waving right hand. Especially with the personas on the internet; Facebook, instagram and snapchat. people are not always who they say they are.

She loves to shake her right hand about, Hiding her left in a fist, Hiding her real self away in a clench, While waving her false from her wrist, You see, she wants us to think she’s the happiest girl, Full of fun and a life with a kiss, That she has the best things and does the most stuff, That she is the happiest Miss, But, clenched tight away, hidden in her left, Is her reality she hides from us all, The reality of herself not able to cope, In her mind she feels boring and small, So, I open her hand and look into her eyes and say, “Your YOU is a perfect for me, I love you for you, not the pretend in a dress, I love when you’re honest and free”.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/6/2018 9:31:00 PM
Beautiful. Articulately and intelligently delivered with emotion.
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Date: 2/6/2018 9:35:00 PM
and well done with your hundredth write :)
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Date: 2/6/2018 9:34:00 PM
Thank you Leanne, I'm super glad u enjoyed this write :)
Date: 2/6/2018 9:18:00 PM
Nice portrait of the conflicted lady---and poignant, caring response to her predicament. Well-done! Thanks for sharing. ---gw
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Date: 2/6/2018 9:23:00 PM
thankyou Gershon, everyone needs a nice dose of honesty cheers :)
Date: 2/6/2018 7:09:00 AM
You said it well Lewis..pretending doesn't work for long..well depicted.
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Date: 2/6/2018 3:55:00 PM
absolutely, pretending is not easy and hides too much, thanks for ur comment Vijay
Date: 2/5/2018 10:54:00 PM
Beautiful poem from the heart. The best kind. Wonderfully done, Lewis.
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Date: 2/6/2018 3:54:00 PM
thanks Line, glad u liked this one :)
Date: 2/5/2018 10:15:00 PM
Wonderful insightful piece Lewis, and delivered with tenderness. You're a good egg :) xomo! (fabulous poet too)
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Date: 2/6/2018 3:54:00 PM
thank u Maureen...lol, hard boiled :)
Date: 2/5/2018 9:13:00 PM
A gentle answer! So sweet!
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Date: 2/5/2018 9:17:00 PM
Thanks Kim, :)
Date: 2/5/2018 8:42:00 PM
"This describes me to a tee, great writing Lewis!"
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Date: 2/5/2018 8:50:00 PM
hi Ayla, i'm so glad you can relate to this write, I think we all have some persona we hide behind, hope u pop out and open ur left hand to show the real u every now and then :). I do through poetry :)

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