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Her Last Date

She’d thought he was eyeing her rack

as with great charm, he led her out back.

But she realized too late

this would be her last date

as her neck got sucked dry by a Drac!


*For the contest of Darren Watson: Be Bram Stoker for a Day

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/13/2014 11:52:00 AM

Lovely limerick. Got sucked by a vampire poor lady. ha ha. love phyl

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 4/17/2014 9:30:00 AM

you found an original and humorous angle with this, andrea! congrats on your win in the contest :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/16/2014 7:49:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 4/16/2014 5:29:00 AM

brilliant xx

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 4/15/2014 5:12:00 PM

An imaginative use of form, you deserved to rack up another win. Congrats

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/15/2014 10:06:00 AM

I loved the humorous way you took hold of this contest! Well done !!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/15/2014 7:51:00 AM

Feeling like Bram Stoker is alive. Congrats on the win,

Aiyah Torres

Date: 4/15/2014 7:12:00 AM

the last date w/ Draco... Not BAD!!! haha... this is xool, Andie.. one that inspired me.. ^__^

Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/15/2014 7:27:00 AM

Ooops! ..I forgot... CONGRATULATIONS!!!! :0)]

Michael Dom

Date: 4/15/2014 6:04:00 AM

Andrea, a cheeky write this. The poor lass, Drac's so bloody minded. Cheers for gory glory!

Jan Allison

Date: 4/14/2014 11:49:00 PM

Congrats on your win - love the humour here I can see why it appealed to Darren. hugs Jan xx

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 4/14/2014 10:15:00 PM

nice andrea... congratulations on winning in the contest... Verlena

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/13/2014 11:28:00 AM

Dear Andrea, Quite a witty approach to the contest and I enjoyed it. Wishing you success in the contest. The limerick is a unique approach and I think Darren will appreciate that. Best wishes, Carolyn

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 4/12/2014 8:17:00 PM

You've put a nice muscle tightening smile on my face, thank you.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 4/12/2014 8:16:00 PM

You've put a nice muscle tightening smile on my face, thank you.

Matthew Anish

Date: 4/12/2014 6:48:00 PM

Nice going - enjoyable! Now check out my O.Henry poem! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Jack Horne

Date: 4/12/2014 3:16:00 PM

LOL, love it : )

Daver Austin

Date: 4/12/2014 9:21:00 AM

Forgive me for being so late in commenting on this delicious morsel. My eyes are such thatL I must use a magnifying glass to read everything. I try to submit some small thing every once in a while just to keep up communication. Love, daver

Kelly Deschler

Date: 4/10/2014 2:01:00 PM

A very funny and creative poem, Andrea. This is a unique take on the Bram Stoker theme. Good luck in this contest!...Thank you so much for your kind comments. :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/10/2014 10:59:00 AM

If one is late, in such circumstance last chance must be availed otherwise becomes the victim of Drac like is felt, Very nice Limerick. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, my lovely friend, bl