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               Woman Praying On Holy Bible In The Morning. Teenager Woman Hand ...

Her Image Drifts

Within the long crevices of twilight As hazy images would slip and fade— Minutes drift like an opalescent rite Where silhouettes flash behind a lampshade, Wheeling faintly on my mind to invade Glimpses from young adulthood I recall Such b r o k e n n e s s this fist could never haul: Yes, Mama’s portraiture finds me needing Treasured vignettes now angled on our wall... Prayers I grant on this date---her wedding. ~ Dizain Poetry Contest Sponsor: Dear Heart 5/18/2020
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La France Avatar
May 22, 2020 at 7:23 AM
Nette, beautifully penned and congratulations on your win in my contest _Constance
Kendrick Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 12:33 PM
Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. I enjoyed reading it today. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Chutani Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 11:09 AM
Lovely tribute to mother's wedding day. Nette, Congrats for top placement. Mohan
Mishra Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 11:34 PM
Coming back to congratulate you on your win Nette :)
Hamilton Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 4:02 PM
Congrats Nette on another winning poem, nice to have you back posting again!
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 1:19 PM
I am back to congratulate you on your First Place win with this wonderful poem Nette! xxoo
Kauffman Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 12:47 PM
Such beautiful, innovative language of images, Nette - "long crevices of twilight," "images would slip and fade" set in twilight. Congratulations on your top placement! Blessings to you!
Rose  Avatar
May 18, 2020 at 2:53 PM
No greater memory then that of your mom, lovely sentiments Nette, be well, stay healthy xo
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 18, 2020 at 4:06 AM
A lovely moving Dizain Nette. I hope you are well. Blessings xxoo
Mishra Avatar
May 18, 2020 at 12:11 AM
Beautiful and creative at the same time with a melodious flow. All the best Nette :)
Mcintosh Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 8:07 PM
Just so beautiful, Nette. I love it so and wish you all the best for the contest. Love to you and God's blessings too... Gina
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