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Her Husband's Wrath

. With prudence I stepped in the candle lit room yes with the utmost discretion and yes there she was without the layer to cover her pink flesh How prudent could I have been with knowledge of her whim a soul did ask “Oh" says i unclad before him “an entry with facts supersedes an entry of chance” That bullet stung

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/15/2011 3:36:00 PM
Had to read again, You were there looking at the forbidden. A bullet is a hard lesson.
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Date: 8/14/2011 9:08:00 PM
Nude flesh in candle light? What more could one ask for? I get the image and it is intriguing!
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Date: 4/21/2011 7:33:00 AM
Missing reading new work from you, James. Hope you and Noah are having fun this spring. Maybe the Easter bunny will bring both of you some treats. Enjoy the holiday, my friend, and thanks for stopping by and reading my work. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/20/2011 6:00:00 PM
Now that is a great punch line!!! .... So clever are you!!
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Date: 4/20/2011 5:34:00 AM
Most creative thing I have read all morning. A very delightful read(: Looking forward to more by you.
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Date: 4/16/2011 9:31:00 PM
May I ask...Did the Bullet have Butterfly Wings? Nice James. ~JSLambert
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Date: 4/14/2011 9:34:00 AM
o la la a hot steamy write my friend. Made me chuckle this morning. Have a wonderful day. love phyl
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Date: 4/13/2011 2:46:00 PM
Screwed, rued, and tatooed in the nude. Love, Dave
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Date: 4/12/2011 11:59:00 PM
haha. I love that last line. Now you be careful in the future, James!!
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Date: 4/12/2011 5:14:00 PM
Another intriguing, romantic write, James! Really enjoyed the wisdom in "an entry with facts supercedes an entry of chance." Very nice! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/12/2011 4:32:00 PM
OUCH James.. incredible piece and very sensuously detailed luv.. the knowledge of her whim.. only a great guy would understand .. u fit that bill with these words my friend.. oh la la..
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Date: 4/12/2011 4:21:00 PM
James this was a very creative and a great piece of poetry.
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Date: 4/12/2011 3:15:00 PM
Reads like that person found themselves in a pickle..Got a chuckle..Sometimes passion or lust makes one make unwise decisions...Sara
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Date: 4/12/2011 1:11:00 PM
lol, I am not sure if I should laugh of feel sorry for the dude that got the bullet James :) another witty write, enjoyed by me.. love wilma
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Date: 4/11/2011 12:00:00 PM
james, you ticcle my ribs, lol! really a smart. playful wrok! greeeat stuff as always! :) huggs, nette
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