Her Hidden Gem

Mama sang while cleaning the house
Friends noticed her melodic voice
Outside, she hid behind her spouse
When he played the sax, she’d rejoice

The church choir was seeking talent
Her soft voice touched a man nearby
So to the choir master he went,
“It’s Wanda you need, but she’s shy”

Soon, at the instructed moment,
Choir members stopped singing mid-song
But mom continued, on she went
Exposing a voice hidden too long

Embarrassed, she stopped singing then
Her talent already revealed
The priest asked her to sing again
A rare gem no longer concealed

By Christmas she took center stage
A soprano singing Christ’s praise
Her shyness was now disengaged
Winning hearts with every phrase

No longer did she sing alone
Wanda’s sweet voice had won acclaim
Her confidence had finally grown
When she received well-deserved fame




*True event 
Written June 16, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 6/25/2014 10:09:00 AM
Fav'd this one because it is great and touched my heart so very deeply! Thanks!!!!
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Date: 6/25/2014 10:07:00 AM
Your mother a great singer, you a great poet. Loved this write my friend!! My mother had 13 children, she sang as she did housework, lots and lots of house work!!! I always wondered why she was so happy . Now ever so hopelessly lost into love with my wife I finally know. The answer to my question was --my Dad!!! He brought her sunshine, love and joy so very, very fine.. Don't ever stop writing.....
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Date: 6/18/2014 3:50:00 PM
this is SO wonderful that her talent was finally brought forth to flourish. well, I caught your comment, as my last one received so far today and now I can leave work and get home! Have a great day. luv, Andrea
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Date: 6/17/2014 11:17:00 PM
good to pay homage to yir' singin' MaMa! Just passin' through to read some of your new stuff. I took a soup vacation. (But NEVER a writing vacation!)
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Date: 6/17/2014 7:53:00 AM
Ahh!! A poem honoring your mom..Good to know of her talent..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 6/17/2014 7:46:00 AM
I love the way you brought out this sweet story poetically, It reminds me of my story, how i ended up leading a church band.. Thanks and am one of the many who enjoy your poems and contests
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