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Her Hidden Garden

She painted her walls slate grey, pulled the drapes to shut out the day. Locked away in a place she calls home, No longer does she answer her phone. Although she has nothing to hide, she refuses to venture outside. Her sanctuary only undermines, Solace, sought in self imprisoned confines No family so to speak of, If so, there is only loss of love. The neighbors pretend she does not exist, Perhaps they tried but do not persist. The mail man comes each day at four, To leave her newspaper by her door. Delivery boy brings her supplies and groceries, But no signs of life does he ever see. A small light comes on each night at eight And burns until very late. It is the hours when others sleep, You sometimes hear her faintly weep. And there inside she spends her days, Painting gardenias and blue jays. Her art lays in piles on the living room floor, Of flowers, birds, and ocean shores. Reclusive artist who left the world behind, Tends to the gardens within her own mind. Where life grows beautiful in paint and pastels, The chosen solitary in which she dwells

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Date: 3/19/2017 12:50:00 PM
This poem is simultaneously very sad and very beautiful. I can visualise the artist surrounded by her wonderful artwork and it probably is very ,very good art. I think the line 'the solace she seeks in self imprisoned confines', could possibly be 'her solace, sought in self imprisoned confines'. This is not meant to be a criticism just my opinion and how it is already written does not detract from its meaning, just jarred a little when read aloud. Love it.
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Darlene Smith
Date: 3/20/2017 11:54:00 AM
You are absolutely right! That line would have worked out better and sounded better when reading aloud. Much appreciate the advice Ms. Jackson. I think I will do some editing. :)

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