Caren Krutsinger Poet Monorhyme

Her Gingerbread Dust Mite Snaps

her gingerbread dust mite snaps
under couch with bands that zaps
hiding between bottle caps
folded with my city maps

under phone with oldie apps
her gingerbread dust mite snaps
try to locate them with claps
hear a ringtone, sounds like raps

lift the couch by holding flaps
under mess hits me like slaps
full of magic things that whaps
marmalade toast and toy that taps

her gingerbread dust mite snaps
oozing in, filling up gaps
slide against forgotten straps
under phone with oldie apps

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Joseph P. DiMino January 2, 2020 at 5:41 AM Brilliant! Wonderful write. I truly enjoy reading your work. Always original and enjoyable. Caren Krutsinger January 2, 2020 at 3:49 PM I just play around, joe, if I get something right, great. It is all about enjoying the process for me.

Sandra Adams January 1, 2020 at 9:08 PM Great monorhyme my friend... a joy to read tonight... :) hugs Sandra Adams January 2, 2020 at 10:18 AM i didn't notice but sometimes do that on my own poems because my mind reads the word correctly so i miss it all together... Caren Krutsinger January 2, 2020 at 4:18 AM I am glad I re-read it. Phone was misspelled in one place. But I do love a monorhyme.

Eve Roper January 1, 2020 at 8:58 PM great very enjoyable write. Caren Krutsinger January 2, 2020 at 4:18 AM Thank you Eve.

Connie Marcum Wong January 1, 2020 at 5:54 PM This is clever and brought a smile Caren. I hope you have a fantastic new year my friend. xxoo Caren Krutsinger January 2, 2020 at 4:18 AM Happy New Year Connie!

FJ Thomas January 1, 2020 at 1:18 PM Wow you've nailed this monorhyme Caren! Caren Krutsinger January 2, 2020 at 4:18 AM Thank you EJ. I appreciate your stopping by. Happy New Year my friend!