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Her Gingerbread Dust Mite Snaps

her gingerbread dust mite snaps under couch with bands that zaps hiding between bottle caps folded with my city maps under phone with oldie apps her gingerbread dust mite snaps try to locate them with claps hear a ringtone, sounds like raps lift the couch by holding flaps under mess hits me like slaps full of magic things that whaps marmalade toast and toy that taps her gingerbread dust mite snaps oozing in, filling up gaps slide against forgotten straps under phone with oldie apps

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Date: 1/2/2020 5:41:00 AM
Brilliant! Wonderful write. I truly enjoy reading your work. Always original and enjoyable.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/2/2020 3:49:00 PM
I just play around, joe, if I get something right, great. It is all about enjoying the process for me.
Date: 1/1/2020 9:08:00 PM
Great monorhyme my friend... a joy to read tonight... :) hugs
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/2/2020 10:18:00 AM
i didn't notice but sometimes do that on my own poems because my mind reads the word correctly so i miss it all together...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/2/2020 4:18:00 AM
I am glad I re-read it. Phone was misspelled in one place. But I do love a monorhyme.
Date: 1/1/2020 8:58:00 PM
great very enjoyable write.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/2/2020 4:18:00 AM
Thank you Eve.
Date: 1/1/2020 5:54:00 PM
This is clever and brought a smile Caren. I hope you have a fantastic new year my friend. xxoo
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/2/2020 4:18:00 AM
Happy New Year Connie!
Date: 1/1/2020 1:18:00 PM
Wow you've nailed this monorhyme Caren!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/2/2020 4:18:00 AM
Thank you EJ. I appreciate your stopping by. Happy New Year my friend!

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