Her Fix

Peroxided blonde
there in the doorway puffing
on a cigarette
inhaling and exhaling
repeatedly till sated.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 5:41 PM
by the way, I"d commented on THIS poem back in August, and I still find it a very enjoyable poem!
Dietrich Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 5:40 PM
That was very sweet of you to comment on so many of my poems. I have nothing more of yours left to comment on. I believe I have seen all of them. I enjoy the personal and "real" touch you give to your comments It's not that common. some here just giving standard comments. Gotta get upstairs. Hubbie returning from truck driving all week. Much to do! yes, DO experiment with different forms. I LOVE forms. see you, Andrea
Dietrich Avatar
August 10, 2010 at 11:39 PM
I like the imagery! LUv, Andrea
Gorelick Avatar
August 8, 2010 at 10:01 PM
I love this kind of poem..this form lends itself to painting a picture..BG
A   Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 2:39 PM
wow,, nice one ...P.D.
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