Her Fix

Peroxided blonde there in the doorway puffing on a cigarette inhaling and exhaling repeatedly till sated.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/15/2010 5:41:00 PM

by the way, I"d commented on THIS poem back in August, and I still find it a very enjoyable poem!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/15/2010 5:40:00 PM

That was very sweet of you to comment on so many of my poems. I have nothing more of yours left to comment on. I believe I have seen all of them. I enjoy the personal and "real" touch you give to your comments It's not that common. some here just giving standard comments. Gotta get upstairs. Hubbie returning from truck driving all week. Much to do! yes, DO experiment with different forms. I LOVE forms. see you, Andrea

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/10/2010 11:39:00 PM

I like the imagery! LUv, Andrea

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/8/2010 10:01:00 PM

I love this kind of poem..this form lends itself to painting a picture..BG

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/8/2010 2:39:00 PM

wow,, nice one ...P.D.