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Pete paced the floor are you sure - scan shows four ... Pete faints! Any theme Than Bauk Contest Sponsored by Charles Messina 1/28/19
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Gilmour Avatar
February 14, 2019 at 12:20 AM
I knew this was a winner! Sending many congrats to you Jan. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Allison Avatar
February 14, 2019 at 7:24 AM
thanks so much Ann it was fun to write!:-) hugs Jan xx
Y. Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 11:37 AM
Hi Jan, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest:-)Alexis
Allison Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 2:49 PM
thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 9:15 AM
LOL, Jan! That would do it! Congratulations!
Allison Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 2:48 PM
thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx
May Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 7:21 AM
Congrats on a fine win Jan!
Allison Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 2:48 PM
thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx
Devonshire Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 6:01 AM
Oh, so glad to see this placing at the top, Jan. Congratulations, dear!
Allison Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 2:48 PM
thanks so much Carolyn:-) hugs Jan xx
Ibeh Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 5:31 AM
Lol, poor Pete! Congrats for winning with this hilarious write, Jan!:-)
Allison Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 2:45 PM
thanks Edward:-) hugs Jan xx
Messina Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 9:44 PM
I just loved this one, Jan. I literally LOL Congratulations on your 1st place win...hugs Charlie xx
Allison Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 2:45 PM
I'm so glad you liked it Charlie!:-) hugs Jan xx
Devonshire Avatar
January 30, 2019 at 1:14 PM
LOVE it, Jan! This will give Charles a great laugh and the form is perfect as well. Winning wishes for you! Hugs, Carolyn
Allison Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 2:44 PM
thanks Carolyn he did like it!:-) hugs Jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
January 30, 2019 at 4:56 AM
Ha ha, love it Jan!
Allison Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 2:44 PM
thanks Tania:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 2:55 PM
it's interesting to see you rhymed it with sure! I know a few americans do say it like shore too. Loved this.
Allison Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 2:41 PM
yes shore and sure floor and four rhyme to me:-) hugs Jan xx
Wolf Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 8:40 AM
Gotta check out this Than bauk business... Peter fainted; we laughed... all thanks to our giggle-girl-galore, J.A., Queen of Laughter. Thanks for the ha-ha, my dear! Best always, Gershon
Allison Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 2:40 PM
thanks Gershon:-) hugs Jan xx
Gilmour Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 6:30 PM
That is brilliant Jan, I think you have a winner here. Loved it!! Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Allison Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 7:40 AM
I hope he likes it Ann its only my second attempt at this form:-) hugs Jan xx
Leffanta Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 5:48 PM
That is the Isle of Man way, i.e., get it all done at once! Great catch! Aloha! Rico
Allison Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 1:29 AM
Long as it doesn't happen again lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Bauer Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 5:46 PM
ha! i think he had the appropriate reaction, jan!
Allison Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 1:28 AM
Thanks ilene:-) hugs Jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 1:16 PM
Every dad to be's nightmare lol. Good luck. Tom.
Allison Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 4:22 PM
It sure must be a shock Tom!:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 8:46 AM
Jan, that's a really good one, loved the wit ~
Allison Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 8:49 AM
Thanks Constance I enjoyed writing for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Y. Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 7:53 AM
Lol! Jan, This is a good and hilarious entry for the contest them. Great job! I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Allison Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 8:23 AM
Thanks Alexis iveonly written one other before, it was a fun challenge:-) Hugs Jan xx
Gentile Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 7:28 AM
I Can't imagine Jan!! Very cute xxoo Happy Monday !
Allison Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 7:48 AM
Thanks mike, have a lovely week :-) hugs Jan xx
May Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 7:21 AM
Ha! Ha! Ha! well done!
Allison Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 7:23 AM
Thanks bobby:-) hugs Jan xx
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