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Pete paced the floor are you sure - scan shows four ... Pete faints! Any theme Than Bauk Contest Sponsored by Charles Messina 1/28/19

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Date: 2/14/2019 12:20:00 AM
I knew this was a winner! Sending many congrats to you Jan. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 2/14/2019 7:24:00 AM
thanks so much Ann it was fun to write!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/11/2019 11:37:00 AM
Hi Jan, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest:-)Alexis
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Date: 2/13/2019 2:49:00 PM
thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/11/2019 9:15:00 AM
LOL, Jan! That would do it! Congratulations!
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Date: 2/13/2019 2:48:00 PM
thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/11/2019 7:21:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win Jan!
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Date: 2/13/2019 2:48:00 PM
thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/11/2019 6:01:00 AM
Oh, so glad to see this placing at the top, Jan. Congratulations, dear!
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Date: 2/13/2019 2:48:00 PM
thanks so much Carolyn:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/11/2019 5:31:00 AM
Lol, poor Pete! Congrats for winning with this hilarious write, Jan!:-)
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Date: 2/13/2019 2:45:00 PM
thanks Edward:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/10/2019 9:44:00 PM
I just loved this one, Jan. I literally LOL Congratulations on your 1st place win...hugs Charlie xx
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Date: 2/13/2019 2:45:00 PM
I'm so glad you liked it Charlie!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/30/2019 1:14:00 PM
LOVE it, Jan! This will give Charles a great laugh and the form is perfect as well. Winning wishes for you! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 2/13/2019 2:44:00 PM
thanks Carolyn he did like it!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/30/2019 4:56:00 AM
Ha ha, love it Jan!
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Date: 2/13/2019 2:44:00 PM
thanks Tania:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/29/2019 2:55:00 PM
it's interesting to see you rhymed it with sure! I know a few americans do say it like shore too. Loved this.
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Date: 2/13/2019 2:41:00 PM
yes shore and sure floor and four rhyme to me:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/29/2019 8:40:00 AM
Gotta check out this Than bauk business... Peter fainted; we laughed... all thanks to our giggle-girl-galore, J.A., Queen of Laughter. Thanks for the ha-ha, my dear! Best always, Gershon
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Date: 2/13/2019 2:40:00 PM
thanks Gershon:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/28/2019 6:30:00 PM
That is brilliant Jan, I think you have a winner here. Loved it!! Kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 1/29/2019 7:40:00 AM
I hope he likes it Ann its only my second attempt at this form:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/28/2019 5:48:00 PM
That is the Isle of Man way, i.e., get it all done at once! Great catch! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 1/29/2019 1:29:00 AM
Long as it doesn't happen again lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/28/2019 5:46:00 PM
ha! i think he had the appropriate reaction, jan!
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Date: 1/29/2019 1:28:00 AM
Thanks ilene:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/28/2019 1:16:00 PM
Every dad to be's nightmare lol. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 1/28/2019 4:22:00 PM
It sure must be a shock Tom!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/28/2019 8:46:00 AM
Jan, that's a really good one, loved the wit ~
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Date: 1/28/2019 8:49:00 AM
Thanks Constance I enjoyed writing for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/28/2019 7:53:00 AM
Lol! Jan, This is a good and hilarious entry for the contest them. Great job! I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/28/2019 8:23:00 AM
Thanks Alexis iveonly written one other before, it was a fun challenge:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/28/2019 7:28:00 AM
I Can't imagine Jan!! Very cute xxoo Happy Monday !
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Date: 1/28/2019 7:48:00 AM
Thanks mike, have a lovely week :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/28/2019 7:21:00 AM
Ha! Ha! Ha! well done!
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Date: 1/28/2019 7:23:00 AM
Thanks bobby:-) hugs Jan xx
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