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Her First Date--Dk

Her first date out was going to be groovy,                                                       lots of fun and go to a movie.                                                                      Her girlfriend and date did go,                                                                      they were off to enjoy the night with a glow.                                                 Half way through the movie show,                                                                his wandering hand went up her shirt real slow.                                             He became dumbstruck to find no calling card,                                                a very tight girdle was standing guard.

 

Date Written: 8/10/2021

7 Place 

DumbstruckContest Judged: 8/29/2021
Sponsored by:charles messina

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Terry Flood Date: 8/30/2021 3:07:00 PM Spoilsport! Congrats on your win, Paula. Terry Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 9/2/2021 11:34:00 AM Thank You, for reading, for writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like my funny write. It is an honor to have a win in this fun contest. Have a blessed day.....................

Marilene Evans Date: 8/29/2021 9:54:00 AM So so cute, funny and witty. Laughed all the way, especially at the end. Congratulations. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 9/2/2021 11:31:00 AM Thank You, for reading, for writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like my cute, funny and witty write. I love to make people laugh/smile. It is an honor to have a win in this fun/wonderful contest. Have a blessed day.....................

Charles Messina Date: 8/29/2021 5:46:00 AM Paula, this is an adorable write. I really laughed out loud on that last witty line :) Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Charlie Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/29/2021 7:57:00 AM Thank You, for reading, for writing and for your congratulations. Glad I made you laugh. I love to make people laugh/smile. It is an honor to have a win in your wonderful contest. Have a blessed day.........................

Emilia James Date: 8/18/2021 3:00:00 PM ha ha good on her and serves him right, a fun read Paula, Emilia : ) Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/29/2021 7:51:00 AM Thank You, for reading and for writing. Glad you like this fun story. Have a blessed day...............

Delice Arleen Skelly Date: 8/12/2021 4:09:00 AM A girdle will stifle any passion, a fun write...Delice Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/12/2021 9:10:00 AM Thank You, for reading and for writing. Glad you like this fun write. Have a blessed day writing away...............

Rama Balasubramanian Date: 8/11/2021 11:28:00 AM Good one! A winner for sure. Thanks for the laugh Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/11/2021 12:07:00 PM Thank You, for reading and for writing. Glad I gave you a laugh with this fun write. I love to give laughs out. Did you say, "winner"??? That sure would be nice. Have a blessed day writing away...............

Anne E Sangster - K Date: 8/11/2021 11:23:00 AM I had a good chuckle when his wondering hand found that little gem :-D Nice one Paula! Cheers Anne :-) Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/11/2021 11:26:00 AM Thank You, for reading and for writing. Glad I gave you a good chuckle with this fun write. I love to make people happy. "Smile" Have a blessed day writing away...............

Joanna Daniel Date: 8/11/2021 2:02:00 AM Fun write, Paula, hands must not be allowed to wander:) Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/11/2021 11:24:00 AM Thank You, for reading and for writing. Glad you like this fun one. So right, "hands must not be allowed to wander." Have a blessed day writing away...............

Harry Horsman Date: 8/10/2021 7:16:00 PM Love this Paula. Last two lines are gems. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/11/2021 11:22:00 AM Thank You, for reading and for writing. Glad you love this fun "Her First Date" write. Thanks for the gems. That made my day. Have a blessed day writing away...............

Jennifer Fenn Date: 8/10/2021 4:33:00 PM Funny Paula! Sounds like this girl played a trick on that guy! Serves him right! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/11/2021 11:20:00 AM Thank You, for reading and for writing. Glad you like this fun write. Have a blessed day writing away...............