Her Feelings

Her soul's now tortured, tormented in black, 
Her spirit’s in terminal ache.
Every thought that she has is an absolute hurt, 
She’s neither asleep nor awake.

She had lived with a love, a jigsaw of a soul, 
A passionate, devoted, young warm.
But he had just left, removed all his touch, 
Leaving a silent little thunder storm.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Manassian Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 11:38 PM
The pain is deep in this write, Lewis. The line that got to me was "her spirit in terminal ache". Sometimes physical pain is easier to take than emotional pain. You've captured this well.
Raynes Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 2:10 AM
Thanku Eileen, this was from my past experiences and my interpretation of her emotions
Sands Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 7:43 PM
That's a good one. I like the line with jigsaw of a soul.
Raynes Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 2:11 AM
Thankyou Heidi, thanks for ur kind thoughts
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