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Her Eyes

Impaled by her sparks Dangling feet can’t touch ground Hunger escapes me Try to form words from lost mind Must learn how to walk again 08/25/10 9:36pm

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/18/2010 10:44:00 AM

sigh...such passion! Light & Love

David Smalling

Date: 9/11/2010 6:40:00 PM

Hey, just don't look in them ... but then there would be no poem like this. Thanks for reading, inspiring and sharing, Jimmy

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/27/2010 10:41:00 PM

Words than can only be penned by a man who has experienced the amazing power of love, Jimbo. Wishing you success in Rick's contest. Love, Carolyn

Katherine Stella

Date: 8/26/2010 2:59:00 PM

You old softy lol love it though outstanding imagery my friend this should do very well in contest also thanks for your kind comments on my beauty poem I just love the black stallion seen my dad break horses and they were the head strong ones and stubborn too sometimes lol keep up the great writing

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/26/2010 7:22:00 AM

Love the romance .....captured by her eyes!!! :) Nice !!!