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Her Eyelashes' Flicker

before melting---
her eyelashes' flicker
with my every breath

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Skat A

December 3, 2015 at 1:10 AM

Hi Kash, thanks for the nice soup mail,, lovely haiku, Enjoyed. SKAT

Funom Makama

March 23, 2013 at 9:23 AM

beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 9, 2012 at 12:44 PM

I am trying to catch up some on my thank you's to all the wonderful poets who have left kind comments on my writings. I thank you so much for your words of kindness Kash. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope you are having a wonderful day. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

May 2, 2012 at 9:01 PM

whew!!! 9 p.m I JUST made my deadline I set for myself. Now I want to do a blog and then get busy on other things.

John Freeman

May 2, 2012 at 6:36 PM

Haaaaaaa! Coo breath Luke, melts the bat guano. Smile. Thanks for stopping by, Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 2, 2012 at 9:19 AM

romantic as ever Kash and a superb visual luv.. appreciate the enthusiastic hello from u luv..

Terry O'Leary

May 2, 2012 at 6:45 AM

More than a flicker... it seems like a flash... Terry

John Lipari

May 2, 2012 at 6:17 AM

Great work...I'm thinking, candle?

David Williams

May 2, 2012 at 2:01 AM

here for a second read Kash, just as good..David

Nette Onclaud

May 2, 2012 at 2:01 AM

wake up, little rosebud!!... where are you, lol... :) huggs!

Andrea Dietrich

May 1, 2012 at 11:40 PM

just here to say HELLO and very soon, Good night!(thanks for the comments, my friend).

Charles Henderson

May 1, 2012 at 10:35 PM

Good one Kash, I answered your questions on face book.

Ashesh Das

May 1, 2012 at 12:57 PM

Beautiful haiku. What a lovely imagery these words paint. Love it.

Ashesh Das

May 1, 2012 at 12:53 PM

Bea

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

May 1, 2012 at 10:50 AM

very descriptive write, with such a romantic undertone. Nice. :D

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

May 1, 2012 at 9:37 AM

A very nice visual here,friend, and thnx for your kind visit, jag

Chittaranjan Dey

May 1, 2012 at 3:02 AM

The beauty of a woman must be seen in her eyes, because that is the doorway to her heart - the place where love resides. Eyelashes plays an important role in the beauty of eyes. You are great here with your unique style of imagery. Love this extraordinary creation.

Andrea Dietrich

April 30, 2012 at 5:30 PM

Just who was melting, she or you? This is awesome, Kash!!

Dinda Minardi

April 30, 2012 at 10:16 AM

Awww... too cute!

Ravindra K Kapoor

April 30, 2012 at 5:55 AM

Beautiful and sensuous sketch of a melting love. With best wishes..Ravindra...Kash

Nette Onclaud

April 30, 2012 at 4:24 AM

ahooo!.... saying the unsayable is your forte.. iloveittt! :) huggs

Elizabeth Wesley

April 29, 2012 at 8:13 AM

The art of suggestion is a gift and you have it Kashi! Just great.

Carolyn Devonshire

April 28, 2012 at 3:18 PM

The lashes flicker, the eyes close and then the kiss comes. Very passionate haiku, Kash. Bravo! Thank you for stopping by my work. I'm doing my best to read poetry again. Love, Carolyn