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Her Eyelashes' Flicker

before melting---
her eyelashes' flicker
with my every breath

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Skat A

Date: 12/3/2015 1:10:00 AM

Hi Kash, thanks for the nice soup mail,, lovely haiku, Enjoyed. SKAT

Funom Makama

Date: 3/23/2013 9:23:00 AM

beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/9/2012 12:44:00 PM

I am trying to catch up some on my thank you's to all the wonderful poets who have left kind comments on my writings. I thank you so much for your words of kindness Kash. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope you are having a wonderful day. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/2/2012 9:01:00 PM

whew!!! 9 p.m I JUST made my deadline I set for myself. Now I want to do a blog and then get busy on other things.

John Freeman

Date: 5/2/2012 6:36:00 PM

Haaaaaaa! Coo breath Luke, melts the bat guano. Smile. Thanks for stopping by, Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/2/2012 9:19:00 AM

romantic as ever Kash and a superb visual luv.. appreciate the enthusiastic hello from u luv..

Terry O'Leary

Date: 5/2/2012 6:45:00 AM

More than a flicker... it seems like a flash... Terry

John Lipari

Date: 5/2/2012 6:17:00 AM

Great work...I'm thinking, candle?

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/2/2012 2:01:00 AM

wake up, little rosebud!!... where are you, lol... :) huggs!

David Williams

Date: 5/2/2012 2:01:00 AM

here for a second read Kash, just as good..David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/1/2012 11:40:00 PM

just here to say HELLO and very soon, Good night!(thanks for the comments, my friend).

Charles Henderson

Date: 5/1/2012 10:35:00 PM

Good one Kash, I answered your questions on face book.

Ashesh Das

Date: 5/1/2012 12:57:00 PM

Beautiful haiku. What a lovely imagery these words paint. Love it.

Ashesh Das

Date: 5/1/2012 12:53:00 PM

Bea

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/1/2012 10:50:00 AM

very descriptive write, with such a romantic undertone. Nice. :D

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 5/1/2012 9:37:00 AM

A very nice visual here,friend, and thnx for your kind visit, jag

Chittaranjan Dey

Date: 5/1/2012 3:02:00 AM

The beauty of a woman must be seen in her eyes, because that is the doorway to her heart - the place where love resides. Eyelashes plays an important role in the beauty of eyes. You are great here with your unique style of imagery. Love this extraordinary creation.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2012 5:30:00 PM

Just who was melting, she or you? This is awesome, Kash!!

Dinda Minardi

Date: 4/30/2012 10:16:00 AM

Awww... too cute!

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 4/30/2012 5:55:00 AM

Beautiful and sensuous sketch of a melting love. With best wishes..Ravindra...Kash

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/30/2012 4:24:00 AM

ahooo!.... saying the unsayable is your forte.. iloveittt! :) huggs

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 4/29/2012 8:13:00 AM

The art of suggestion is a gift and you have it Kashi! Just great.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/28/2012 3:18:00 PM

The lashes flicker, the eyes close and then the kiss comes. Very passionate haiku, Kash. Bravo! Thank you for stopping by my work. I'm doing my best to read poetry again. Love, Carolyn