Her Dream

As crystallized ice melts away
And fire breaks the morning
She lies in bed dreaming

What started out as breath taking
Now turns for the worse
And steams her mind

Her breathing, shallow
Her eyes, sunken
Her face, fading

And then, it closes in
There’s nowhere to go
There’s no escape

It’s coming for her
She screams for help
No one answers, she’s alone

Vines entangle her
Thorns bite her flesh
Fear grips her heart

Through the tangle of forest plants
She pushes harder 
Trying to escape

She’s trapped by a wall
In desperation she claws at the wall
Breaking fingernails and flesh

She tries climbing, too steep
She wants to turn and disappear 
It’s too late, there’s no escape

It’s behind her, it’s here
Choking her every movement
She stops resisting

And…

As the crystallized ice melted away
And the fire broke the morning,
She lay in bed dreaming
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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August 3, 2012 at 3:15 AM
i like this alot too some really decent imagery and nice ending.
Guerra Avatar
July 20, 2009 at 3:23 PM
Bravo... power in the mind it is exciting to tell about it... enjoyed the poem
Fraser Avatar
June 20, 2009 at 11:38 AM
Dreams are cogs in our brains ticking over in the sub concious, good ones - bad ones. Some we remember, some we don't. Kool write Candice>>James
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