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Her Crystalline Laughter

The soul would have no rainbow if the eyes had no tears. —Native American proverb Waterfall beauties shedding crystalline tears an indigo vision an outpour of emotion she thought she was loved by him, wherever did she get that notion? In the beginning it was love at first sight but then when they fought it never showed like the stars that disappeared in the sky it slowly began to die ; Years later when she found real love the kind that watered the roots of her soul she finally learned the truth about the inns of Love; Waterfall beauties shedding tears of happiness both were wet but these ones dried quickly, to the sound, of her crystalline laughter.

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Date: 9/6/2020 12:42:00 PM
Lovely choice of words in your poem... That's sounds like some laughter...
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Date: 9/6/2020 11:47:00 AM
Beautiful! Gorgeous words of her story.
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Date: 9/5/2020 2:36:00 PM
Yes, as I have found in my own life, real love is sometimes not as flashy, but the roots are strong and deep, lovely metaphors of the tears and laughter..
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Date: 9/5/2020 10:14:00 AM
Beautiful expression.
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Date: 9/4/2020 5:26:00 PM
waters of joy swish off the tears...your heart-rendering words move me, vie.. huggs
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Date: 9/4/2020 12:48:00 PM
Verses of true love scintillate in your poem my friend...
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