Her Cloak of Glory

A new day dawning Adorned in cloak of glory Elements awashed

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/30/2010 6:20:00 AM

nice one, ..p.d.

Edward Orozco

Date: 4/29/2010 9:35:00 AM

nice piece!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/26/2010 9:16:00 PM

Hi, Audrey. It's nice to get those pictures to make us try to do haiku, isn't it? I see Deb down here coaching ya. hahaha. Ya gotta love her! thanks for your sweet comment. andrea

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/26/2010 5:00:00 PM

much better Audrey just try to stay in the present tense....no ed's....ing's and s's ..you do have the setting in line 1 and the action in 2&3 MUCh better!!!! Light & Love

Skat A

Date: 4/25/2010 8:16:00 PM

Wonderful write Audrey, have a great night,,Irma

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 4/25/2010 3:23:00 PM

Nice Haiku, Audrey. Interesting wording that present a wonderful imagery. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.

Kelly Zakerski

Date: 4/25/2010 2:43:00 AM

Good Morning Audrey - I'm not getting your emails - I sent you one about a month ago, but never heard back. Not sure why I'm not getting them - are you sending to kzak4151@yahoo.com? Beautiful Haiku dear. Luv, Kelly

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/24/2010 3:10:00 PM

Good luck BBF i=with your lovely entry for the new contest by Raul... wonderful thoughts in your Haiku..luv.. and thankxxx for your many wonderful words..luv.. Linda-Marie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/24/2010 2:18:00 PM

Great write...Keep the creative pen flowing...If for the contest should do welll...Good luck..Sara