Her Charms

The legions, of her irresistible charms,
 
Marched on

And

Unopposed conquered, my defenseless 

Heart!




© Demetrios Trifiatis
   28 FEBRUARY 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Chircop Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 6:19 AM
Charming and honey sweet this is.Wishing you many years of being charmed : )Charma
Thirtyseven Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 5:42 AM
Wonderful, enjoyed this muchly.
Trifiatis Avatar
March 3, 2015 at 11:16 AM
Thank you so much my kind friend, S.T. for taking the time to visit! I appreciate it!
Kendrick Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 7:02 PM
Ahh!! Enjoyed reading your work..Sara..Thanks for dropping by..
Trifiatis Avatar
March 3, 2015 at 11:17 AM
Sara, so nice to see you! Thank you for your kind visit!
Chakrabarty Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 12:52 PM
Oh so great"The legions, of her irresistible charms, Marched on...who else can write this except Demetrios. A brilliant soul.Love
Trifiatis Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 5:45 PM
Rajat , my good friend, thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment!
Roper Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 9:17 AM
Words that would charm any woman. Blessings dear friend
Trifiatis Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 9:53 AM
Eve, thank you my dear! I am certain you have charmed your man!
Nunez Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 8:21 AM
My dear friend sire, thank you for your patience. I must have read "his" instead of "my". I must have been sleepy while typing the comment... Seriously, she of irresistible charms certainly conquered the best, your precious heart, to have come up this priceless epigram! A 7. HUgs and smiles for you and your beloved! :D Kim
Trifiatis Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 9:52 AM
Thank you my dearest, Kim! This comment is more like you! Thank you so much for your magnanimity to accept your mistake and comment again! Greatly appreciated!
Lamoureux Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 7:28 AM
I have succumbed to my woman's charms and like you I have no wish to resist.
Trifiatis Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 7:32 AM
Absolutely correct! When one finds His liberator, what is the point in resisting my friend, Richard? Thank you so much for visiting and commenting in such a constructive way!
Andresen Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 6:41 AM
- Beautiful, dear Demetrios - I wish you a great weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 6:53 AM
Have a glorious weekend my dear friend, Anne-Lise! Thank you for your delightful visit and comment!
Smith Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 3:16 AM
Fantastic... Great metaphor..... Tim
Trifiatis Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 5:04 AM
Metaphor is a Greek word and as Greek myself, I have to use it to the best of my abilities, dear Tim! Ha-ha! Thank you my friend for your precious visit and comment!
Manassian Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 3:07 AM
Ktapliktikos esai....Wonderful poem....What power this gives a woman to know her charms are irresistible. Sweet delight it must be. Hugs
Trifiatis Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 5:02 AM
Efxaristo agapimeni mou fili, Eileen, for your dear visit and superb comment! You know best though, for not many, if any, could resist your charms!
Hunjeri Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 1:44 AM
Another great LOVE write from you. I enjoy reading your poems.
Trifiatis Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 5:07 AM
Thankful am I for liking it, my good friend, Njeri!
Furlong Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 1:44 AM
Short but so potent. Loved it. :)
Trifiatis Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 5:06 AM
Welcome my friend, David, thank you so much for visiting and commenting!
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