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Her Charm

When I first saw her figure, I started staring at her allure, her simple laugh, her enticing eyes, her irresistible delight, accidentally. Simply these where enough modifying, something solid, deep inside me, after all this selfsame meaningless cycle. I feel a need introducing myself; I started interfering, she was responding; how gentle, how loner, how tender were my first glorious alters. Her thin lips smiling, her thunderous voice her tantalizing eyes, her smiley face; made me a funny person, just to make her laugh, and draw her lovely simple smile again, so I benefit bat of an eye staring to her in an unrealizable behavior. Later I realised... That's weird; more and more attracted I became! she directly became my safe harbor witch happened with no one before! Those weird feelings and changes, those took place unconsciously deep, so deep interiorly ;got defined finaly, in one meaningful word... but still unsure if it's from both sides time is my only find out scared nervous, afraid for loosing my only rare precious diamond.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/11/2012 5:32:00 PM
Love your Poem, welcome to Poetry Soup Naamani. Elizabeth
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Date: 1/10/2012 5:27:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Naamani. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 1/9/2012 9:55:00 AM
I really like this one.Love, Sarah.
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