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" BLOOMING HEART " MY PHOTO, ©May be a closeup of rose and nature

Her Arrow

A target my chest was 

For

You to practice, oh Cupid, 

Till

The moment her arrow 

Hit my heart!







© Demetrios Trifiatis
      07 February 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Fowler Avatar
February 23, 2021 at 3:13 PM
Sweet, lovely write Demetrios. It speaks volumes in few words. :) Linda
Proxenos Avatar
February 9, 2021 at 5:05 AM
Cupid's favorite day is almost upon us. Arrows will be flying to and fro all over the world. I see your heart is about to be hit by an arrow. A clever choice of words to suit the breathtaking pic you posted my friend. Hugs and blessings Jennifer .
Krutsinger Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 10:04 PM
I am so glad for you both!
Kendrick Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 4:22 AM
Very expressive one. Beautiful bloom. I know when it blossoms out it's beauty will be unsurpassed. Sara
Trifiatis Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 2:54 PM
Sara, my dearest, so good to see you after so long! Thank you so much for taking the time to visit. Hope you are in good health. Blessings!
Y. Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 6:02 PM
Hi Demetrios, Your dear wife had a good aim. I enjoyed my friend:-) Alexis
Trifiatis Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 1:51 AM
Thank you, dearest Alexis, for your lovely visit and comment! Hugs xxx
Pandit Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 7:04 AM
So beautiful when that happens. The budding rose says so.
Trifiatis Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 5:57 PM
Thank you very much, my friend, Vijay! Stay safe!
Cunningham Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 1:33 AM
Your dear wife hit the bullseye when she aimed at you Demetrios. Tom
Trifiatis Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 2:22 AM
Absolutely, my friend, Tom, and even after 34 years, I still feel the sweet pain! Thank you so much, my dearest friend! Blessings!
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