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Her Aching Heart

It's not the first time her heart is breaking She swallows tears as her heart is aching Who'll explain the ache her heart is facing? Every time she hopes her heart is racing For that one true love her heart is waiting When will he be found? Her heart's debating Through dark wrenching ache her heart is wading Will that love come soon? Her heart's evading Agonised, she cries her heart is stinging To harrowing hope her heart is clinging 04.24.2021 Quatrain rhyme scheme: abcb 5 syllables per line

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Date: 4/30/2021 4:37:00 PM
this reads and LOOKS so cool. Belated congrats. I don't know where the quatern is that you told me about. Let me try one more time to find it.
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Date: 4/28/2021 8:47:00 AM
Jo, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt -Ache- Challenge with your wonderful Quatrain poem about aching for love, well done, love _Constance
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Date: 4/24/2021 1:41:00 PM
Such a lovely piece penned so well Jo, with beautiful rhyme and excellent imagery too. Blessings always, Gordon
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Date: 4/24/2021 10:27:00 AM
Interesting lay-out, Jo. I'm still wondering what it was supposed to portray--tears? Well-constructed. Enjoyable read.
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Date: 4/24/2021 5:35:00 AM
Her ache is felt throughout--well done, Jo.
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Date: 4/24/2021 5:33:00 AM
I felt all thee ache off unrequited love. A lovely dirge to Eros.
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Date: 4/24/2021 3:30:00 AM
A marvelous symphony of the heart, my dearest Jo! A fave for me. Blessings and hugs xxx
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