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Her Aching Heart

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It's not the first time 
  her heart is breaking 
    She swallows tears as
      her heart is aching 

    Who'll explain the ache
      her heart is facing?
        Every time she hopes 
          her heart is racing 

        For that one true love 
          her heart is waiting 
            When will he be found?
               Her heart's debating 

            Through dark wrenching ache
              her heart is wading 
                Will that love come soon?
                  Her heart's evading 

                Agonised, she cries 
                  her heart is stinging 
                    To harrowing hope 
                      her heart is clinging 



04.24.2021


Quatrain rhyme scheme: abcb
5 syllables per line

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2021 4:37:00 PM

this reads and LOOKS so cool. Belated congrats. I don't know where the quatern is that you told me about. Let me try one more time to find it.

Constance La France

Date: 4/28/2021 8:47:00 AM

Jo, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt -Ache- Challenge with your wonderful Quatrain poem about aching for love, well done, love _Constance