Her

“H” represents the humility she 
displayed from the moment she 
opened her eyes; 
“E” would suggest a revision of 
evolution, 
Because it would take many stories and 
infinite lifetimes to explain the beauty 
of her essence; 
And “R” would ask for a human replica 
of her, 
For many men should admire such as I 
do. 


Modern Shakespeare’s should pay
close attention, 
For her personality writes poetry 
itself, 
And yet the pen remains in my 
hand, 
To describe beauty in third person. 


My cold and nonchalant heart has never 
asked for another summer to warm up too, 
Unless purposeful reasons for an appeal of the 
heart were discovered, 
And yes! 
These reasons always spelt out 
her name. 


As in life which contains both success 
and failure, 
I’ll risk it all, in hope’s for mutual 
affection; 
I’d serenade time if it meant I could 
spend more in her serenity; 
Forget the ridicule and episodes of embarrassment, 
The only thing on television tonight is the 
heartfelt expression of a peacock, 
Waiting to display his romantic feathers to the 
archetype woman; 
Today and forever; 
I’ll dedicate to her.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Vasquez Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 8:12 PM
Really beautiful... wow deep
Clemons Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 8:26 PM
Thanks Skylisha.
Pagan Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 10:00 AM
I love it... Nicely penned. Thank you for sharing.
Clemons Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 11:11 AM
Thank you Maritza. Appreciate the love.
Duncan Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 9:57 PM
very nicely done Jiril ;)
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May 20, 2014 at 10:08 PM
Thanks Debbie. Appreciate the love.
Traore Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 10:38 AM
This is beautiful I would be thrilled to be the girl that this poem was written for, and I know your girlfriend or that special girl in your life must be delighted to be with you. xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo.
Clemons Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 1:51 PM
Thanks Mariam. Appreciate the love.
Traore Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 10:40 AM
THAT'S HOW U KNOW I LOVE IT I READ IT AGAIN FOR THE 2ND TIME
Jones Avatar
February 20, 2014 at 2:01 PM
This is Uhhh well i will get back to you on that because this poem took my words always. From the moment i started reading it i couldn't take my eyes of of it. i really enjoyed this poem.You have a way with words. and the ability to touch people heart just by speaking what is on your. May god bless you and you have a wonderful day.
Clemons Avatar
February 20, 2014 at 3:31 PM
Thanks April. Appreciate the love. Read some of my newer ones. Peace
Moore Avatar
February 1, 2014 at 7:40 PM
WOW!!!!!!!
Clemons Avatar
February 1, 2014 at 8:24 PM
Thanks Cathy.
Traore Avatar
January 30, 2014 at 12:27 PM
This is just beautiful I love it.
Clemons Avatar
January 30, 2014 at 1:01 PM
Thanks Mariam. Appreciate the love.
Young Avatar
December 14, 2013 at 11:58 AM
Wow, this is crazy good. I cant even point out a favorite line, or stanza cuz it all fits together so well. Please keep up writing, and post some more on here, Im favoriting now!!
Clemons Avatar
December 14, 2013 at 12:33 PM
Thank You Gina.
Cortez Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 3:26 PM
Very nice writing.. definition of feminity. True love comes from within and no inhibitions. Super Like.
Clemons Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 3:54 PM
Thanks Cecilia. Appreciate it.
Minard-Adler Avatar
October 16, 2013 at 9:42 AM
This is deep and really good. I love reading poems like this and I you are such a great poem artist(poet).
Clemons Avatar
October 16, 2013 at 1:33 PM
Thank you very much, Briana. Appreciate the love.
Bordner Avatar
October 5, 2013 at 2:45 PM
Your Muse is proud no doubt Jiril - this composition is a masterful display of temperance, passion, melancholoy, and Divine purpose - a mature flow,a tight from begining to ever begining my friend - bravo on your confidence and proper recognition of true inspiration - J.A.B. %
Clemons Avatar
October 5, 2013 at 3:06 PM
Thanks, Justin. Appreciate the love
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September 7, 2013 at 10:00 AM
Good write-up.
Clemons Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 10:16 AM
Thanks Alozor. Appreciate the love.
Lanre Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 6:47 PM
Lovely and very lucky. 'The pen still remain in hands'. She must be very lucky and beautiful. Kudos. Gl
Clemons Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 8:23 PM
Thanks. Appreciate the love.
Jain Avatar
July 6, 2013 at 10:24 AM
hey Jiril ! thanks for your generous remarks on my poem! and any girl would be humbled to be so beautifully described . YOUR WORDS are PERFECT !! greetings alpana
Clemons Avatar
July 6, 2013 at 10:31 AM
Thanks Alpana. Appreciate the love.
Shines Avatar
July 5, 2013 at 8:11 AM
i just love your poem.very beautifully written and well presented the power of HER :) .
Clemons Avatar
July 5, 2013 at 8:30 AM
Thank you Kenisha. Appreciate the love.
Pettit Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 8:55 PM
You have described the power of a woman very pervasively with this entry.
Clemons Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 9:25 PM
Thanks Robert. They are truly powerful. Appreciate the love.
Hamilton Avatar
July 3, 2013 at 6:17 PM
excellent write it has everything good flow deep and full of feelings Shadow x smiles
Clemons Avatar
July 3, 2013 at 6:18 PM
Sorry I mean Thanks. Shadow Hamilton. Appreciate the love.
Clemons Avatar
July 3, 2013 at 6:17 PM
Thanks Skyler. Appreciate the love.
Honeytip Avatar
July 3, 2013 at 5:03 PM
Jiril.....any woman would be utterly poweless over the spell you have woven with your beautiful words here. Just beautiful....love Roobs :-)
Clemons Avatar
July 3, 2013 at 5:12 PM
Lol Thanks Ruby. Appreciate the love.
Honeytip Avatar
July 3, 2013 at 5:03 PM
*powerless
Thomas Avatar
July 3, 2013 at 12:56 PM
Hi jiril, this speaks with depth , warmth & honesty!!! Beautiful write....really love the words:) ty4sharing
Clemons Avatar
July 3, 2013 at 3:05 PM
Thanks Cherie. Glad you enjoyed the poem.
Goff Avatar
July 3, 2013 at 10:40 AM
Jiril....am simply stunned.....spoken...amazing! a tribute of immense strength.....the ability of a poet to wring the heart of one's soul out....this beauty captures this essence, line by line! jimbo
Clemons Avatar
July 3, 2013 at 3:06 PM
Thank you James! I appreciate the love. Always great to have readers who understand the deepness of your work.
Gildersleeve Avatar
July 3, 2013 at 10:27 AM
Jiril this an excellent poem. Very deep, I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for reading my poem. Warm Smiles, Connie
Clemons Avatar
July 3, 2013 at 3:05 PM
Thanks Connie. Appreciate the love.
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July 3, 2013 at 9:48 AM
You have just became one of my fav's!!! Excellent piece!!!
Clemons Avatar
July 3, 2013 at 10:08 AM
Thanks Pace. I appreciate the love.
Eastman Avatar
June 15, 2013 at 7:05 AM
Such dedication and devotion. Beautiful.
Clemons Avatar
June 15, 2013 at 8:21 AM
Thanks, Carol.
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