Her

“H” represents the humility she 
displayed from the moment she 
opened her eyes; 
“E” would suggest a revision of 
evolution, 
Because it would take many stories and 
infinite lifetimes to explain the beauty 
of her essence; 
And “R” would ask for a human replica 
of her, 
For many men should admire such as I 
do. 


Modern Shakespeare’s should pay
close attention, 
For her personality writes poetry 
itself, 
And yet the pen remains in my 
hand, 
To describe beauty in third person. 


My cold and nonchalant heart has never 
asked for another summer to warm up too, 
Unless purposeful reasons for an appeal of the 
heart were discovered, 
And yes! 
These reasons always spelt out 
her name. 


As in life which contains both success 
and failure, 
I’ll risk it all, in hope’s for mutual 
affection; 
I’d serenade time if it meant I could 
spend more in her serenity; 
Forget the ridicule and episodes of embarrassment, 
The only thing on television tonight is the 
heartfelt expression of a peacock, 
Waiting to display his romantic feathers to the 
archetype woman; 
Today and forever; 
I’ll dedicate to her.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 5/25/2015 8:12:00 PM
Really beautiful... wow deep
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Jiril Clemons
Date: 5/25/2015 8:26:00 PM
Thanks Skylisha.
Date: 10/21/2014 10:00:00 AM
I love it... Nicely penned. Thank you for sharing.
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Jiril Clemons
Date: 10/21/2014 11:11:00 AM
Thank you Maritza. Appreciate the love.
Date: 5/20/2014 9:57:00 PM
very nicely done Jiril ;)
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Jiril Clemons
Date: 5/20/2014 10:08:00 PM
Thanks Debbie. Appreciate the love.
Date: 2/26/2014 10:38:00 AM
This is beautiful I would be thrilled to be the girl that this poem was written for, and I know your girlfriend or that special girl in your life must be delighted to be with you. xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo.
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Jiril Clemons
Date: 2/26/2014 1:51:00 PM
Thanks Mariam. Appreciate the love.
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Mariam Traore
Date: 2/26/2014 10:40:00 AM
THAT'S HOW U KNOW I LOVE IT I READ IT AGAIN FOR THE 2ND TIME
Date: 2/20/2014 2:01:00 PM
This is Uhhh well i will get back to you on that because this poem took my words always. From the moment i started reading it i couldn't take my eyes of of it. i really enjoyed this poem.You have a way with words. and the ability to touch people heart just by speaking what is on your. May god bless you and you have a wonderful day.
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Jiril Clemons
Date: 2/20/2014 3:31:00 PM
Thanks April. Appreciate the love. Read some of my newer ones. Peace
Date: 2/1/2014 7:40:00 PM
WOW!!!!!!!
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Jiril Clemons
Date: 2/1/2014 8:24:00 PM
Thanks Cathy.
Date: 1/30/2014 12:27:00 PM
This is just beautiful I love it.
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Jiril Clemons
Date: 1/30/2014 1:01:00 PM
Thanks Mariam. Appreciate the love.
Date: 12/14/2013 11:58:00 AM
Wow, this is crazy good. I cant even point out a favorite line, or stanza cuz it all fits together so well. Please keep up writing, and post some more on here, Im favoriting now!!
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Jiril Clemons
Date: 12/14/2013 12:33:00 PM
Thank You Gina.
Date: 12/10/2013 3:26:00 PM
Very nice writing.. definition of feminity. True love comes from within and no inhibitions. Super Like.
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Jiril Clemons
Date: 12/10/2013 3:54:00 PM
Thanks Cecilia. Appreciate it.
Date: 10/16/2013 9:42:00 AM
This is deep and really good. I love reading poems like this and I you are such a great poem artist(poet).
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Jiril Clemons
Date: 10/16/2013 1:33:00 PM
Thank you very much, Briana. Appreciate the love.
Date: 10/5/2013 2:45:00 PM
Your Muse is proud no doubt Jiril - this composition is a masterful display of temperance, passion, melancholoy, and Divine purpose - a mature flow,a tight from begining to ever begining my friend - bravo on your confidence and proper recognition of true inspiration - J.A.B. %
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Jiril Clemons
Date: 10/5/2013 3:06:00 PM
Thanks, Justin. Appreciate the love
Date: 9/7/2013 10:00:00 AM
Good write-up.
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Jiril Clemons
Date: 9/7/2013 10:16:00 AM
Thanks Alozor. Appreciate the love.
Date: 7/10/2013 6:47:00 PM
Lovely and very lucky. 'The pen still remain in hands'. She must be very lucky and beautiful. Kudos. Gl
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Jiril Clemons
Date: 7/10/2013 8:23:00 PM
Thanks. Appreciate the love.
Date: 7/6/2013 10:24:00 AM
hey Jiril ! thanks for your generous remarks on my poem! and any girl would be humbled to be so beautifully described . YOUR WORDS are PERFECT !! greetings alpana
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Jiril Clemons
Date: 7/6/2013 10:31:00 AM
Thanks Alpana. Appreciate the love.
Date: 7/5/2013 8:11:00 AM
i just love your poem.very beautifully written and well presented the power of HER :) .
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Jiril Clemons
Date: 7/5/2013 8:30:00 AM
Thank you Kenisha. Appreciate the love.
Date: 7/4/2013 8:55:00 PM
You have described the power of a woman very pervasively with this entry.
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Jiril Clemons
Date: 7/4/2013 9:25:00 PM
Thanks Robert. They are truly powerful. Appreciate the love.
Date: 7/3/2013 6:17:00 PM
excellent write it has everything good flow deep and full of feelings Shadow x smiles
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Jiril Clemons
Date: 7/3/2013 6:18:00 PM
Sorry I mean Thanks. Shadow Hamilton. Appreciate the love.
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Jiril Clemons
Date: 7/3/2013 6:17:00 PM
Thanks Skyler. Appreciate the love.
Date: 7/3/2013 5:03:00 PM
Jiril.....any woman would be utterly poweless over the spell you have woven with your beautiful words here. Just beautiful....love Roobs :-)
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Jiril Clemons
Date: 7/3/2013 5:12:00 PM
Lol Thanks Ruby. Appreciate the love.
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Ruby Honeytip
Date: 7/3/2013 5:03:00 PM
*powerless
Date: 7/3/2013 12:56:00 PM
Hi jiril, this speaks with depth , warmth & honesty!!! Beautiful write....really love the words:) ty4sharing
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Jiril Clemons
Date: 7/3/2013 3:05:00 PM
Thanks Cherie. Glad you enjoyed the poem.
Date: 7/3/2013 10:40:00 AM
Jiril....am simply stunned.....spoken...amazing! a tribute of immense strength.....the ability of a poet to wring the heart of one's soul out....this beauty captures this essence, line by line! jimbo
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Jiril Clemons
Date: 7/3/2013 3:06:00 PM
Thank you James! I appreciate the love. Always great to have readers who understand the deepness of your work.
Date: 7/3/2013 10:27:00 AM
Jiril this an excellent poem. Very deep, I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for reading my poem. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Jiril Clemons
Date: 7/3/2013 3:05:00 PM
Thanks Connie. Appreciate the love.
Date: 7/3/2013 9:48:00 AM
You have just became one of my fav's!!! Excellent piece!!!
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Jiril Clemons
Date: 7/3/2013 10:08:00 AM
Thanks Pace. I appreciate the love.
Date: 6/15/2013 7:05:00 AM
Such dedication and devotion. Beautiful.
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Jiril Clemons
Date: 6/15/2013 8:21:00 AM
Thanks, Carol.
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