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HER

Poetic words that roll off the tongue that is what she was all about Every early morning before the crack of dawn, her soft boiled mind searched, filling in ideas filling in, THE POEM that would flower in the light of day; She swam in the silence of her bedroom searching for words that would light the emptiness she felt inside. filling it she felt filling it she knew that writing poetry was the only thing to do, when her soul went, all askew...

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Date: 3/19/2024 4:58:00 PM
Beautifully penned ... Each lovely line flows so freely into the next ... I feel like I know "HER", all too well :) This is a fave for me, too :)
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Date: 3/17/2024 6:06:00 AM
I enjoyed the physical structure of your poem as well as you imagery (her soft boiled mind searched) Your poem reminds me of what Bill thinks about my early morning rise to write poetry (minus the emptiness). I have to fave this dear Rose. It's too good for others not to read. have a great day, Sara
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Date: 3/17/2024 5:37:00 AM
Really beautiful work and word choice word placement!
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