Henry 'Gnat' Wilson's Bedtime Routine

Teeth freed late of jaw
Catch feign vulture caw
Keep time with thumb gum massage.
Three jiggers to rinse
Fire stick of incense
Lifted induced camouflage.

Shirt off shorts glued on
Vision of futon
Once upon a time life rocked.
Tent wants repairing
Sirens shrill blaring
Dumpster score steel trigger cocked.

Yawn fingers through beard
Glance field-mates look weird
Two toe-touches old time's sake.
Fetally grounded
Mortally wounded
War's horrors too much to shake.

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Written by Nancy Jones after an ok day at work on 8/24/11
Inspired by nette onclaud and her contest “Allouette”
In honor of Don and Donny and Dean and countless others whose long list of struggles now include poverty, health woes, homelessness, and extreme loneliness.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Sapp Avatar
September 24, 2011 at 9:03 PM
Beautiful, Nancy. Beautiful metaphores, and brutal truth. Wayne
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September 7, 2011 at 10:41 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the "ALOUTTE YOUR CLEANSING RITE" poetry contest sponsored by nette onclaud. CR
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September 6, 2011 at 10:40 PM
Congratulations on your placement in this contest Nancy!
Mehta Avatar
September 6, 2011 at 6:01 PM
Contratulations on the win in the contest,Nancy
Lane Avatar
September 6, 2011 at 12:56 PM
great job nancy. Tony
Brown Avatar
September 6, 2011 at 11:03 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Nette's contest Nancy. Love, Carol
Song Avatar
September 6, 2011 at 8:27 AM
Nancy--do u work at a homeless shelter? JUst curious. Great piece of work here...painting characters with mastery-so rare a write. Have a great rest of the week. Love, Gwendolen
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September 6, 2011 at 12:22 AM
Congratulations on your win. Lee
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September 5, 2011 at 10:49 PM
A great job Nancy Congratulations on your worthy poetry. Agape, Moses
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September 5, 2011 at 6:00 PM
CONGRATS NANCY ON THIS COOL ENTRY AND CONTEST WIN SO EXCITING LUV.. AMAZING WORDS OF ALOUETTE POETRY.. AWESOME READ..LUV..
Horne Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 3:54 PM
Many congrats on all your wins, Nancy : )
Williams Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 3:22 PM
hey Nancy congrats on your win..David
Brown Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 9:48 AM
Lift your pen and let your creative words flow onto the paper Nancy. Thank you for sharing your writing with us as I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
Lane Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 7:59 AM
Beat the pants off of my entry. I really liked it. Tony
Wesley Avatar
August 24, 2011 at 7:28 PM
Makes my head spin with your grqphic pictures. A wonderful verse to challenge the mind.
Beck Avatar
August 24, 2011 at 6:38 PM
wow you certainly can deliver a powerful verse....I especially like the lines "once upon a time life rocked" "two toe-touches old time's sake".......you've the poetic knack of saying a hundred things in one phrase.....very well done Nancy
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August 24, 2011 at 6:04 PM
WoW!~ This can go in either of two directions. At first I thought it was a hommeless person and then it became clear it's a soldier. A pretty grim picture either way. But he is making the best of what he has to live with. Good job. God Bles, JB
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