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Henry 'Gnat' Wilson's Bedtime Routine

Teeth freed late of jaw Catch feign vulture caw Keep time with thumb gum massage. Three jiggers to rinse Fire stick of incense Lifted induced camouflage. Shirt off shorts glued on Vision of futon Once upon a time life rocked. Tent wants repairing Sirens shrill blaring Dumpster score steel trigger cocked. Yawn fingers through beard Glance field-mates look weird Two toe-touches old time's sake. Fetally grounded Mortally wounded War's horrors too much to shake. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Written by Nancy Jones after an ok day at work on 8/24/11 Inspired by nette onclaud and her contest “Allouette” In honor of Don and Donny and Dean and countless others whose long list of struggles now include poverty, health woes, homelessness, and extreme loneliness.

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Date: 9/24/2011 9:03:00 PM
Beautiful, Nancy. Beautiful metaphores, and brutal truth. Wayne
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the "ALOUTTE YOUR CLEANSING RITE" poetry contest sponsored by nette onclaud. CR
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Date: 9/6/2011 10:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in this contest Nancy!
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Date: 9/6/2011 6:01:00 PM
Contratulations on the win in the contest,Nancy
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Date: 9/6/2011 12:56:00 PM
great job nancy. Tony
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Date: 9/6/2011 11:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Nette's contest Nancy. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/6/2011 8:27:00 AM
Nancy--do u work at a homeless shelter? JUst curious. Great piece of work here...painting characters with mastery-so rare a write. Have a great rest of the week. Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 9/6/2011 12:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Lee
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Date: 9/5/2011 10:49:00 PM
A great job Nancy Congratulations on your worthy poetry. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/5/2011 6:00:00 PM
CONGRATS NANCY ON THIS COOL ENTRY AND CONTEST WIN SO EXCITING LUV.. AMAZING WORDS OF ALOUETTE POETRY.. AWESOME READ..LUV..
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Date: 9/5/2011 3:54:00 PM
Many congrats on all your wins, Nancy : )
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Date: 9/5/2011 3:22:00 PM
hey Nancy congrats on your win..David
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Date: 8/25/2011 9:48:00 AM
Lift your pen and let your creative words flow onto the paper Nancy. Thank you for sharing your writing with us as I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/25/2011 7:59:00 AM
Beat the pants off of my entry. I really liked it. Tony
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Date: 8/24/2011 7:28:00 PM
Makes my head spin with your grqphic pictures. A wonderful verse to challenge the mind.
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Date: 8/24/2011 6:38:00 PM
wow you certainly can deliver a powerful verse....I especially like the lines "once upon a time life rocked" "two toe-touches old time's sake".......you've the poetic knack of saying a hundred things in one phrase.....very well done Nancy
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Date: 8/24/2011 6:04:00 PM
WoW!~ This can go in either of two directions. At first I thought it was a hommeless person and then it became clear it's a soldier. A pretty grim picture either way. But he is making the best of what he has to live with. Good job. God Bles, JB
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