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Henhouse Party

The chook house was found in disarray; eggs were broken in a manic affray, there were playboys galore; drunk chooks on the floor - the police are suspecting foul play.

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Bette Bavington

Date: 12/21/2019 7:43:00 AM

I never could do a limerick so my hat is off to you.

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 12/21/2019 7:06:00 PM

Hello Bette … thanks for reading and commenting. A proper lyric is not as easy to write as it looks and it took quite some time to learn the craft - Merry Christmas Bette - Lindsay

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/20/2019 10:37:00 PM

Good one, Lindsay! :-) Janice

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 12/21/2019 12:33:00 AM

Hello Janice … pleased you enjoyed this little piece of silliness - Merry Christmas Janice - Lindsay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/20/2019 6:51:00 PM

awesome word play!! Clever boy

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 12/21/2019 12:31:00 AM

Hello Andrea … there is so many of these words to play on that provide wit. Thank you Andrea - Merry Christmas - Lindsay

Paul Callus

Date: 12/17/2019 2:01:00 PM

Same as previous Limerick's 'horse play' I'm now happily digesting 'foul play', Lindsay. You're really good at these! ~ Wishing you a happy Christmas, my friend. // paul

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 12/21/2019 12:29:00 AM

G'day Paul … thank you for your kind comment Paul. I really appreciate it - Merry Christmas Paul - Lindsay

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/16/2019 5:12:00 PM

'Foul play' -- such a great ending. Bullseye! :) gw

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 12/21/2019 12:27:00 AM

G'day Gershon … thank you Gershon. The English language allows for many play on words wit doesn't it - Merry Christmas Gershon - Lindsay

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/15/2019 11:06:00 PM

HI Lindsay, I lover your poetic versatility! Happy Christmas my friend to you and your family. Blessings, Jennifer.

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 12/21/2019 12:23:00 AM

G'day Jennifer … thank you for your comment and have a great festive season - Merry Christmas Jennifer - Lindsay

Rico Leffanta

Date: 12/14/2019 12:36:00 PM

Well done, Lindsey! Aloha! Rico

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 12/21/2019 12:21:00 AM

G'day Rico … perhaps the riot act should have been read and the chooks warned that they'll replace the turkeys on Christmas Day - Merry Christmas Rico - Lindsay

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/14/2019 4:36:00 AM

"fowl play" - hilarious!

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 12/21/2019 12:19:00 AM

Hello Caren … can't you turn your back on the party chooks for one second can you - Merry Christmas Caren - Lindsay

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/14/2019 3:59:00 AM

Foul play, this is priceless lol.

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 12/21/2019 12:17:00 AM

G'day Tom … should have put this one in a Christmas cracker I reckon - Merry Christmas Tom - Lindsay