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Helplessness

Staring out at nothing Feeling blank, cold, crippled physically and emotionally. Hoping for a brighter tommorrow Rest is not peaceful if at all Pain in heart, joints, hands and toes Everywhere pain Torn between living and existing Pain becomes an obsession to control Ceaseless torment in soul.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/4/2009 12:03:00 PM
Very internal emotional write Doris>>James
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Date: 9/2/2009 2:42:00 PM
Doris I feel your pain I am a carer for my wife and she is constantly in pain too. When things get really bad we have to sit and pray and thank God for his mercies. God Bless will remember you in my prayers Doris. Leon
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Date: 9/2/2009 2:41:00 PM
Pain of physical and emotional sometimes is hard to handle.
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Date: 9/2/2009 2:38:00 PM
Great descriptions, "Pain in heart, joints, hands and toes" nice work.
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