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Helpless

sleepless nights wakeless mornings thoughtless trance Although my body moves along my mind remains fixated on the epitome of pulchritude Perpetual dominance of my thoughts; The longer we are apart, The more my mind slowly rots You’ve captivated more than just my heart You took my mind and my soul Without you, I will never be whole I know I should progress but my mind only lets me regress back into this helpless state unable to think of anything else

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/26/2012 9:52:00 PM
ALEX S, CONGRATS !! In my sisters, brokenness' contest.. xox~PD
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Date: 10/25/2012 3:42:00 PM
We all wish at one time or other to be able to shut off our minds. Powerful words and emotions Daniel. Congrats on your win and a warm welcome to the soup. Hugs
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 10/25/2012 3:45:00 PM
Sorry Alex....my son Daniel was on my mind and I typed his name by accident.
Date: 10/25/2012 5:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your poen winning in ~SKAT's "Brokenness" contest Alex. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/25/2012 1:11:00 AM
Big congrats Alex xx
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Date: 10/25/2012 1:01:00 AM
CONGRATS ALEX ON A MAGNIFICENT WRITE AND WIN LUV ..
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Date: 10/7/2012 1:13:00 AM
Lovely write Alex! The mind is a powerful tool especially when thoughts threaten to overwhelm you. You've tied up the theme to the title very well. Nice!
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Date: 9/30/2012 9:02:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you this today Alex. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/28/2012 3:25:00 PM
sux to be helpless .. to be thinkin of some one but...u r whole when ur by urself .. but it feels more like a hole till u give half to someone else.. but they have to give u half back too so they can make room and they cant jus give you all bad or all good or it will never work.. they have to give u the missing pieces...then it locks in place.. then that love will never go away... so dont be helpless theres always another day... great write.. have a blessed day :)
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Alex S
Date: 9/29/2012 11:36:00 PM
Thanks for the words of encouragement. I always feel better after I write. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.

Book: Shattered Sighs