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Redeemed by the Saviour through His loving kindness* our souls, from sin’s wages, now ransomed, own grand gift life eternal midst peace toward joyous sharing for others to have hope … securing their future. Pardoned by God Himself, we can surely forgive exercising faith's strength to reach needy and lost transformed by the Spirit, divinely touched indeed leading hearts to heaven … bringing immortal bliss. Conquering selfishness while yielded to the Lord our servant attitude flourishes against pride building lives with kindness, exposing truth and light propelled by love of Christ to worship forever.
*Psalm 36:7 How excellent is thy lovingkindness, O God! therefore the children of men put their trust under the shadow of thy wings. July 24, 2021 7th place, "IMMORTALITY YES OR NO" Premier Contest Sponsored by Chantelle Anne Cooke; judged on 7/28/2021.

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Date: 12/8/2021 8:11:00 PM
Beautiful message here, Beata and so superbly written … a contest winner too, I see, congrats!
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Date: 7/29/2021 4:36:00 AM
A beautiful write on this subject. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 7/28/2021 3:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely write. Love your line "Pardoned by God Himself, we can surely forgive." So True. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Date: 7/24/2021 10:24:00 PM
Beata, The contest entered was already won, and it was always within you. 'Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It is not rude, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps no record of wrongs. Love does not delight in evil but rejoices with the truth.' 1 Corinthians 13:4-7
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Date: 7/24/2021 12:46:00 PM
Beautifully done. I hope you win. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
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