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feels like too much bad NEWS

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Tinkling, twinkling, violin picking, harp stringing, 
 light the blue sky, the snow on rocky cliffs
 the heaviness of his lies weigh like the rocks
 on a cold empty hill in winter 
 the sounds thick and sticky
 how the tinkling violin strings call out
 the harps lightness raises my heart 
 and lightens the heaviness of his  
 spiteful soul stinging, while hearing News
 twinkling sounds drive away his angry darts
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February 15, 2020 at 12:37 PM
redone a bit
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