Help Me

I’m in despair
Just like a pear. 

The inside of my stomach 
Is churning with sorrow.
And I am tired of suffering in horror.
Day by day 
I am slowly drifting 
Like the waves in 
Deep sorrow.

And I don’t want to let the tears out 
For I know if I do 
They will be coming down my face 
Like a flood

So Heavenly Father 
In these times of despair 
I am turning to you for help. 

Heavenly Father Please Help Me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
July 21, 2020 at 10:58 PM
Thank you for your honest prayer; I hope everything is revealed to you.
Hamilton Avatar
July 2, 2020 at 9:27 PM
Such a nice plea of desperation, I hope it's just a write and not real feelings, I think you may like my post today, it's a song that reflects what you're feeling!
Hamilton Avatar
July 3, 2020 at 6:36 PM
Please check out my new song, That's when I fall down upon my knees! I'm sure it will give you a lift!
Krauss Avatar
July 3, 2020 at 2:05 AM
It is a write but it is also real feelings well but I am strong and I know that things will get better.
Leffanta Avatar
July 2, 2020 at 1:29 PM
"God helps those who help themselves!" Stop thinking about what you need and focus on what others need! Aloha! Rico
Leffanta Avatar
July 3, 2020 at 1:26 PM
When one thinks on one's self, flaws are magnified but shrink when compared to others! Aloha! Rico
Krauss Avatar
July 3, 2020 at 2:04 AM
Thank you for your comment. I need to focus on what I need at the moment but I am also focusing on what others need as well. I still know that I need to make sure I am well taken care of so that I am able to take care of others.
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