Help Me

I’m in despair Just like a pear. The inside of my stomach Is churning with sorrow. And I am tired of suffering in horror. Day by day I am slowly drifting Like the waves in Deep sorrow. And I don’t want to let the tears out For I know if I do They will be coming down my face Like a flood So Heavenly Father In these times of despair I am turning to you for help. Heavenly Father Please Help Me

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/21/2020 10:58:00 PM

Thank you for your honest prayer; I hope everything is revealed to you.

John Hamilton

Date: 7/2/2020 9:27:00 PM

Such a nice plea of desperation, I hope it's just a write and not real feelings, I think you may like my post today, it's a song that reflects what you're feeling!

John Hamilton
Date: 7/3/2020 6:36:00 PM

Please check out my new song, That's when I fall down upon my knees! I'm sure it will give you a lift!

Emily Krauss
Date: 7/3/2020 2:05:00 AM

It is a write but it is also real feelings well but I am strong and I know that things will get better.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 7/2/2020 1:29:00 PM

"God helps those who help themselves!" Stop thinking about what you need and focus on what others need! Aloha! Rico

Rico Leffanta
Date: 7/3/2020 1:26:00 PM

When one thinks on one's self, flaws are magnified but shrink when compared to others! Aloha! Rico

Emily Krauss
Date: 7/3/2020 2:04:00 AM

Thank you for your comment. I need to focus on what I need at the moment but I am also focusing on what others need as well. I still know that I need to make sure I am well taken care of so that I am able to take care of others.