Help Friar !

Can’t do right,
I try so hard with might,
The smallest things I mess up or fail.

Why can’t I seem to overcome, learn, succeed and do ?
Is there weakness, a fault , not enabling me through ?
I’m expected to be good and just.

Others so this desire,
Help Friar !
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Gorelick Avatar
June 2, 2010 at 1:14 PM
I think you can learn William..you certainly mastered this form. Congrats on your success and keep writing.BG
Pickett Avatar
June 2, 2010 at 8:37 AM
A new friend... Hey man I wanted to let you know that you were one of the two 2nd place winners in my contest.... Congrats and I hope to see you in my next contest.....:JP]
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