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Love was great, right from the start What more could we ask of this affair Living joyously with happy hearts Believing we had not a care Suddenly things began to swirl I watched as you lost control Curling up like a little girl Not allowing me to console I want to help, lend some aid I want to absorb some of the pain Don’t understand why you’re afraid All this trying is just in vain I gave it all till there was no more I drained my body of all resource Now I’m crawling on the floor Hit after hit of mental force You took my entire life from me All that’s left is a hollow shell Listen to my final plea Don’t leave me alone in this state of hell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/9/2010 6:32:00 PM
Things will get better you are helig right now because your writing and getting it out. Keep sharing... Your always so quiet thanks for allowing me to see this part of you,,,,,Love always Rhonda. Caryn would be blown away by this one..Keep writing
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Date: 7/2/2010 10:46:00 AM
Good poem..hang in there; it gets better with time. - All the best, Karen
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