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A bird is visiting my yard
One that I have never seen before
Eating from the ground so vigorously
Pecking like a Sandpiper or a Woodpecker

That pecks on a tree
Looks like a Woodpecker
But not exactly and there are really four
I suppose there could be more

He has the ladder back
On  his back, and a long strong thick beak
A red spot below his head
On the top of his back its said

His upper chest or top of the breast
A half moon as dark as night
Accented on the bottom half by mostly white
He works and works pecking the ground

Why he almost wears me down
Now he's joined by a goldfinch
Of such a brilliant hue
A male Bluebird eats undistrubed too

When the mystery bird takes
To flight on his tail there is a spot of white
I could watch him all the day
But responsibility calls me away

(My daughter said her husband said that it is a Northern Flicker and I looked it up and the 
pictures of the Northern Flicker match what I am seeing.)

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Date: 2/22/2010 5:18:00 AM
This reminds me of my first sightings of hoopoes when I stayed at Kibbutz Erez in Israel. They really looked like tiny zebras.Enjoyed reading this poem, Sara!..Keep writing!...Gert
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Date: 2/18/2010 3:16:00 PM
i like this poem, the story poem where you can figure out the unknown through it's description, poetic bird watching, thats kinda cool
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Date: 2/16/2010 3:16:00 AM
Great to keep a watch Sara, it brightens the day and by sharing you hav ebrightened ours.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 2/15/2010 8:35:00 PM
THIS TIME I READ YOUR COMMENT FIRST. WELL I AM NOT MUCH OF A BIRD OBSERVER. I WOULD SAY IT IS A WOODPECKER OTHERS WOULD SAY DIFFER, ON HOW YOU MAKE YOUR POETRY A MYSTERY..IS THE REASON I LIKE TO READ YOUR WORK ..I LIKE A CHALLENGE...THIS ONE I AM GOING TO LOOK UNDER BIRDS.....I.T.
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Date: 2/15/2010 8:34:00 PM
THIS TIME I READ YOUR COMMENT FIRST. WELL I AM NOT MUCH OF A BIRD OBSERVER. I WOULD SAY IT IS A WOODPECKER OTHERS WOULD SAY DIFFER, ON HOW YOU MAKE YOUR POETRY A MYSTERY..IS THE REASON I LIKE TO READ YOUR WORK ..I LIKE A CHALLENGE...THIS ONE I AM GOING TO LOOK UNDER BIRDS.....I.T.
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Date: 2/15/2010 7:43:00 PM
The beauty of birds so beautifully described in this poem Sara.. they are such lovely creations of God for us to enjoy .. thankxxx for your lovely comments on my poetry reads tonight.. and for your encouragement in my contest entries... why don't u enter some of your wonderful poetry? they are certainly sure winners... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/15/2010 6:25:00 PM
Interesting observation Sara. Sounds like myself, I love watching nature's many types. Just a joke; do you know the difference between a woodpecker and a peckerwood?Smile! Sincere, Agape, Moses THANKS FOR ALL YOUR COMMENTS
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Date: 2/15/2010 3:07:00 PM
northern flicker or yellow hammer
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Date: 2/15/2010 2:51:00 PM
it is a flicker, I saw them and looked it up. I forget the specific type. I will try to find it again. It is a woodpecker, they eat bugs and peck them out of the ground and the trees.
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Date: 2/15/2010 2:06:00 PM
Sounds like a woodpecker to me. Love to watch the birds, busy little guys. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 2/15/2010 1:42:00 PM
What an intriguing visitor you had, Sara. He does sound like a Woodpecker -- there are many species. They used to peck relentlessly and keep me awake while floating in the pool. Luckily, they always chose dead trees so no harm was done. You give us a rich description of "the mystery bird." Enjoyable read! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/15/2010 11:46:00 AM
There is four birds just alike visiting my yard. They look somewhat like a Ladderback Woodpecker but are different. I have never seen a Woodpecker eat from the ground. This bird is larger than a Blackbird but maybe not as large as a Crow but almost. It is very beautiful. I have enjoyed watching them for the last few days. They come to feed in the mornings. Does anyone have any idea what they might be?Sara
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