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THE REALITY OF NIGERIA AND ITS ONLY SOLUTION WHICH IS: TO SPLIT UP!

Hell's Hospitality

The sun cries for us, its heat fades away
snowflakes sprinkle round its orbit, yet go unmelted
it feels like evening, but its yet noon
time never changes its pace but now runs from a rifle
daylight sadly pretends, just to soften night's mockery.

Blood has substituted the rains
death has defined our borders
humanity is rendered homeless
and politics, given the borrowed authority of a landlord.
Life is cheaper than wine
tribal dominance exhibited in a show glass
for love to become an expired product.

Unity is deprived of its oxygen
from a gang of beasts, spare headed by religion.
Genocide celebrated, killers protected
understanding and cooperation, required from the affected
silence and denial, demanded from the afflicted
marginalization defended and grievances rejected.

The edge of the cutlass strikes harder than racism
Indigenes in their own homes hit worse than xenophobia
hope is lost, drowned in the sea of Impunity
faith is locked up in a cage underneath evil's valley
decades of cries to the heavens
the tears flow down to meet more affliction.

The sun rises, but presents in dark red
setting hours later to the notice of no one
a people bounded on falsehood
a large home of smaller fenced habitations
as everyone needs protection from everyone
and where space becomes too small for the stars;
but when distinguished into different galaxies,
it beams brighter to be a better decoration.
An unbearable course too small for the river to flow
makes nature justify its split into tributaries.
Enemies can no longer be in one home, 
so live and let's leave, or leave and let's live
is the only policy left for us all
and the survival anthem for this beautiful garden
no more suitable for community germination.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Mcdaid Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 4:59 PM
sure is one hell of a write beautifully penned funom wishing you a blessed weekend
Strempfl Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 6:29 PM
This poem really paints a picture with your expressions and enjoyed so much that I had to read it over again.
One Avatar
August 18, 2019 at 2:39 PM
powerful political poem my friend... wow...
Strempfl Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 10:19 PM
Powerfully written with thoughts and emotions
Horsman Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 4:44 PM
Wow, this needs to be published in a mag, needs to be read by many, many folk...so well written, and driven home to the reader...excellent poetry.
Labyrinth Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 3:32 AM
Congratulations Funom. Powerfully written, with an intelligence that not many Westerners would have a true first-hand grasp of the reality of horror faced hourly in that part of our world. Hell is certainly on Earth. "....and the survival anthem for this beautiful garden no more suitable for community germination".
Makama Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 8:09 AM
Thank you so much Ladyy Labyrinth. I truly appreciate
Rodrigues Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 4:59 AM
A powerful write, Funom! Congratulations on POTD!
Makama Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 8:09 AM
Thank you so much Kim.
Kiser Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 9:28 PM
Wow...what to say after that. It's horrible the things we humans do to one another. Even sadder that we try to hide it with false religious beliefs. Sadly there are more dark souls hiding behind the religious masks than souls of light. Collectively, as a species we can do better...why don't we?
Makama Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 8:08 AM
Religion which suppose to be a source of peace, happiness, unity and betterment of humanity has sadly become a dangerous weapon of oppression, murder and theft. This reality is so palpable in Nigeria.
Sergi Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 1:24 PM
My belated congratulations on a sad but powerful poem. religion as well as faith should be a personal thing but not separated by the human psyche. If you can't live in peace then do not believe.
Makama Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 8:07 AM
My friend from Italy.. I am always very happy reading your comments on my pages.. Thank you very much
Ashley Avatar
August 3, 2019 at 7:25 PM
Your poetic pen spills potent ink with this exceptional poem, Funom. Such a sad and deeply impactful piece. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Makama Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 8:06 AM
Thank you so much Susan Ashley
Mchattie Avatar
August 2, 2019 at 3:26 PM
A powerful and wonderful write. Really hits home. Have a great day.
Makama Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 8:05 AM
Thank you so much David McHattie
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 2, 2019 at 1:44 PM
This poem is such a powerful cry for the plight of the people. Your line 'so live and let's leave, or leave and let's live' lets the truth of desperation sink in to the core. I am so happy your poem is being honored with POTD Funom, to possibly awaken more to the atrocities on going. Your poem is so deserving of POTD! Congratulations my friend! God Bless! xxoo
Makama Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 8:05 AM
Thank you so much Connie... Our present world is getting worse as life and virtue now means absolutely nothing to some.
Kitchin Avatar
August 2, 2019 at 4:30 AM
An excellently penned powerful poem, congratulations on POTD!
Makama Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 8:03 AM
Thank you so much Tania Kitchin
Rose  Avatar
August 2, 2019 at 1:55 AM
Your pen is untied here and powerful to reckon with. xo
Makama Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 8:03 AM
Thank you so much Pixie Dust
Romios Avatar
August 2, 2019 at 1:12 AM
What a fabulous POTD Congratulations. Great Honor. Panagiota
Makama Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 8:03 AM
I really and truly appreciate Panagiota Romios
Nicole Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 9:41 PM
Reality is here upon the page, in these words. I wish it weren't so. Our World is falling apart- piece by piece. Very sad indeed. Congratulations Funom, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
Makama Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 8:02 AM
Thank you so much Brandy.. I wish reality does not come with so much pain.
Messina Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 8:23 PM
Awesome Poetry Funom. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD...Charlie
Makama Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 8:01 AM
Thank you so much Charles Messina
Allison Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 4:39 PM
powerfully penned Funom, very well deserving of POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
Makama Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 8:01 AM
Thank you so much my good friend. Nice reading your words on my page.
Lindley Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 4:20 PM
Congratulations on POTD honors awarded my friend....
Makama Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 8:00 AM
Thank you so much Robert Lindley
Adams Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 3:26 PM
back with a congratulations on poem of the day!
Makama Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 7:59 AM
Thank you so much Sandra Adams
Fairchild Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 1:28 PM
I do not know, where this refers to, but it sounds like Afghanistan. War is hell. Genocide is worse. God bless you for writing this. Until we stop genocides and stop abortion and stop murdering each other, the return of the burden upon our heads will be a relentless pursuer. Well written and powerful!
Makama Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 7:59 AM
It's Nigeria. Hell now has many annexes in this our present world. Nigeria is one of them. Thank you for stopping by
Shaw Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 9:50 PM
There's no place like earth - it's Hell . . . ; )
Wanter Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 9:42 AM
Perhaps it is the duty of articulate poets to call attention to plights such as this. Great writing. Congratulations!
Mcgee Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 9:42 AM
Congrats on your POTD with this thought provoking poem!
Makama Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 7:58 AM
Thank you so much Jeanne McGee
Lawless Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 9:02 AM
Funom, the beauty of this poetic rendition of hell dupes the reader into staying to feel its horror.
Makama Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 7:57 AM
Thank you John Lawless.. Its been a while we conversed. Hoping to stay consistent here
Roper Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 8:18 AM
back with congratulations on POTD
Makama Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 7:56 AM
Yeah... Thank you Eve Roper.
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