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Hell's Fury

Opening my eyes …To the fire
In pain I can’t describe - Hell’s flames …Are beyond my thinking - Beyond comprehension
Nothing can quench …The fire I am alive - I cannot die - I’m on fire … In the depths of a place 
I never imagined … Or dreaded - A place I didn’t believe existed

There is pain, torment - Yes… weeping and gnashing of teeth 
In the darkness …Black horror - A dreadful place where there is no Light – because … There is no God here - He has forever disappeared 
Never to be there … With His kindness
His love and light - never again will I know good

Questions pierce my mind
The times I could have chosen a different path
The way, the truth, the life
He offered me salvation from this horrific place
I didn’t choose His grace and now I’m forever embraced ny these angry, torturous flames
This anguish that never goes away

This is a horror I didn’t think could be - A reality … now I’m paying forever  - For my lack of faith 

A horror story - A true story - Of life and death
Choose life - Jesus saves from this
Pain that is beyond words and comprehension 
Give Him your soul - He will make you whole
Save you from this …Ungodly home
Eternal fire for those who choose such - Awful trepidation

Forever awaits - This is your chance




Luke 13:28
King James Version

28 There shall be weeping and gnashing of teeth, when ye shall see Abraham, and Isaac, and Jacob, and all the prophets, in the kingdom of God, and you yourselves thrust out.

God made a way…

John 3:16
King James Version

16 For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life.

I’m thankful that I’m saved and won’t ever see this place I portray in this poem!!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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