Helloooooooo!!!

Bridge across planets
Loudspeaker to universe
Can you hear my heart?
 


for Gareth's Contest: "Familiarity Unknown"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
October 23, 2010 at 4:33 PM
Good write in this one..I can just see that bridge...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work and my blog..I appreciate it very much..Sara
Owens Avatar
April 18, 2010 at 11:42 AM
Congratulations on your win...enjoyed...Marty
M Avatar
April 18, 2010 at 8:53 AM
Absolutely ADORE this title!!! Also, I love "Loudspeaker to universe, can you hear my heart". The photoed rock wall center opening does appear as a megaphone, indeed! Had not thunk it til now! Creative view!
Sweetheart Avatar
April 18, 2010 at 8:21 AM
Congrats Iolanda on your winning poem in Gareth's contest.. another wonderful victory for a wonderul Haiku from your gifted pen..luv.. Linda-Marie...
Dietrich Avatar
April 15, 2010 at 3:12 PM
OOOOH, so THIS is the one for the contest. It is really good, better than even the one I first thought was in the contest! Luv, andrea
Chircop Avatar
April 11, 2010 at 12:39 AM
Duduuum,Duduuuum..We can hear it loud clear and wonderful..Charma
A  Avatar
April 10, 2010 at 10:17 PM
GOOD LUCK. ENJOYED, THANK YOU.
Johnson Avatar
April 10, 2010 at 10:14 PM
Very imaginative. Good luck. Joyce
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