Winged Warrior Poet Rhyme

Hello Yellow

In the yellow yawning yearning still
The Yellow Warbler greets the daffodil
Amongst the yielding yellowish Sun
As the landscape yellows its youthful run.


March.03.2016   Yellow contest by Silent One

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Winged Warrior March 5, 2016 at 12:45 PM Oh noooo...I forgot to enter it into the contest...now I'm all yellow...^WW^

Andrea Dietrich March 4, 2016 at 7:45 PM I echo Broken wings, this is truly delightful and charmingly yellow!! Winged Warrior March 4, 2016 at 7:58 PM Thank you my dear Andrea...I just wish S1 would stop it with these color contests...I'm getting sea sick...I'll be vomiting colors for days LOL...god bless...^WW^

Constance La France March 4, 2016 at 1:35 AM WW, your yellow poem is delightful, I am loving this 7 ~ Winged Warrior March 4, 2016 at 11:44 AM Thank you my dear Wings...its always a delight to have you visit...and to see your generous comments...with respect and admiration...^WW^

Daniel Turner March 3, 2016 at 7:47 PM Very bright! I like it. I like the alliteration in the first line too. Good luck in contest. Peace my friend:) Winged Warrior March 3, 2016 at 8:35 PM Thank you Daniel...we'll give S1 a great challenge for his contest lol...god bless...^WW^