Hello To the Soup

Hello to the Soup




My name is Damien and I start my journey in the soup
I create words that riddle, rhyme, twist and loop.

Some folk say my name means The Evil One,
However for the record No I'm not The Prodigal Son.

I am just your normal everyday average savage,
My pen to the paper I methodically ravage.

I came here to say hello and wish you all well,
Before my wicked words cast their spell.

Hello everyone thank you for reading!


Damien Knight 02/20/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Salehi Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 5:47 PM
Hello Darien,good to hear from you.
Mcconnell Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 3:49 PM
Nice one Damien, really fun piece , enjoyed this!
Hicks Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 3:16 AM
Fun way to introduce yourself, Damien. You sound like a real character. I was hoping for maybe a Gandalf ... but it looks like I might be dealing with a Saruman. Yikes! Lol...
Davey Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 4:58 PM
LOL very witty opening write, well done and welcome to Poetry Soup
Knight Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 12:27 AM
cool thanks I obviously like your work a lot so thanx for stopping by to read mine
Mark Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 7:40 AM
Nice entry...a couplet with reasonable unforced rhymes, not sure how savage your pen will be, but be rest assured, there are those that will skim you and pat your back...and then there's me...who will read every word , digest every nuance, and not ...I repeat NOT let you get away with anything less than your best....welcome to the Soup...
Knight Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 4:53 PM
Well thank you I appreciate that very much
Andresen Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 4:02 AM
- Welcome with your first poems here on PoetrySoup, Damien - PoetrySoup is simply the world's best :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Knight Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 4:52 PM
Thank you
Lane Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 4:36 AM
Hello, Damien, and thank you for posting. Welcome to the site. I'm not sure what your definition of an 'average savage' might be, but it sounds interesting...as long as your ravaging and spell casting is limited to your writes. ;)
Knight Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 3:06 PM
Thank you and don't worry just a savage with a pen.or.pencil that's all
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