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Across the blue sky in golden warmness, birds fly in a 'V' shape in total grace. The sunshine bathed in softhearted kindness, caressing a child's delicate blush face. Birds fly in a 'V' shape in total grace. She sits entertaining in her small world. Caressing a child's delicate blush face on a table set for tea; time unfurled. She sits entertaining in her small world by the vibrant bed of blooming flowers on a table set for tea; time unfurled. She pretends she is with her friends for hours. By the vibrant bed of blooming flowers, she says to her dolls, "Hello, Brie and Dee," she pretends she is with her friends for hours, "I'm so glad you dropped in for cake and tea." She says to her dolls, "Hello, Brie and Dee," a perfect day against blushing blossoms, "I'm so glad you dropped in for cake and tea," as butterflies flitted among the mums. A perfect day against blushing blossoms, the sunshine bathed in softhearted kindness, as butterflies flitted among the mums across the blue sky in golden warmness. 1/15/2019

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Date: 2/4/2019 1:43:00 PM
Hello Eve, I remember doing that when i was a little girl. A lovely poem tht brought back memories. have a nice day my fri
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Date: 1/21/2019 1:53:00 PM
Congratulations, Eve, a lyrical pantoum!
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Date: 1/20/2019 1:54:00 PM
Eve, this is a beautiful poem--tinged with sadness. CONGRATS on your win! Janice
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Date: 1/20/2019 1:37:00 PM
- Hello, Eve :) - Congratulations on your winning poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/20/2019 1:26:00 PM
Lovely poem Eve, congrats. :)
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Date: 1/20/2019 11:40:00 AM
Congratulations Eve, a well deserved win.
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Date: 1/20/2019 11:24:00 AM
Very nice Pantoum Eve..Congrats on your win..
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Date: 1/20/2019 7:34:00 AM
Awesome Eve very nice my friend Congratulations
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Date: 1/20/2019 7:00:00 AM
I remember that painting and lovely pantoum Eve.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 1/16/2019 6:49:00 PM
OMG Eve, this is so beautiful, it takes e back to when I was so little and having little tea parties, as Caren said it does have a slight touch of sadness but so beautiful at the same time, thank you for sharing and take care........Vera
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Date: 1/16/2019 2:25:00 AM
A gorgeous pantoum, Eve, and it has a little teensy bit of sadness, which I think makes it sweet and thoughtful. I enjoyed it because I have been there, as a little girl, having tea parties with my dolls. Wishing someone was there to play.
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