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Hello September

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September, I welcome your brand new moon, Fun autumn color changes that occur Blessing new seeds to fulfill new fruit soon Falling in love with autumn cool breeze that does stir Sounds of strumming strings unfurl brittle limbs A uninterrupted breeze, a soothing kiss amber leaves crowd Enchanting they fall round and round with wings Life elegance amongst scribble crayoned clouds With first breath, the wakeful light of dawn days Departing summer amid cooler nights Spirit's pureness admires and sings praise Losing oneself in serenity of the dim sky's sight Remember September as Fall enters Passionately and unhurried moon veils the sky Surrendering to hints of cool winter 9/17/2021 Sponsored by: Mystic Rose Rose Contest Name HELLO SEPTEMBER

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 10/12/2021 10:22:00 PM

Such grand, original phrasing here like "Life...amongst scribble crayon clouds." Exceptionally creative. Truly, an enjoyable posting to read! Brian

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 10/3/2021 10:09:00 AM

Beautiful imagery, Eve. A beautiful verse, that introduces us, once again to this lovely season.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/20/2021 11:37:00 AM

This would have been more than enough "With first breath, the wakeful light of dawn days Departing summer amid cooler nights Spirit's pureness admires and sings praise Losing oneself in serenity of the dim sky's sight" to make a magnificent poem Eve

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/20/2021 7:13:00 AM

What a great entry, I expect this will do well. Thanks as well for your kind visit and comment on my latest poem. ;0)

Eve Roper
Date: 9/20/2021 9:09:00 AM

Hello Richard , it got N/A

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 9/20/2021 6:54:00 AM

"Passionately and unhurried moon veils the sky Surrendering to hints of cool winter" - beautiful lines I will repeat in my mind! Enchanting poem - as enchanting as September is! To my faves. Love ~ Mala

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/20/2021 4:28:00 AM

Phantasmagoric imagery, dearest Eve! Blessings!

David Walker

Date: 9/19/2021 12:40:00 PM

Beautiful imagery Eve. I love autumn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/19/2021 11:37:00 AM

beautiful poetry, Eve. I loved the inventive line about the scribbled crayoned clouds. That was so cool!

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 9/18/2021 11:08:00 PM

Such a beautiful write on Fall dear Eve... "Falling in love with autumn cool breeze that does stir"... loved this line... Have a lovely day.. Best wishes and hugs... ~ Ani

Quoth Theraven

Date: 9/18/2021 4:10:00 PM

Eve, This hello to autumn, how magnificent. True beauty's kiss shines through in your poem's call to dance, before the long winter sets in. -Richard

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/18/2021 7:36:00 AM

Enjoyed the tenor of your verses, Eve, welcoming September, weaving in anticipation of colorful autumn. All the best.

Brian Strand

Date: 9/18/2021 1:12:00 AM

Ah yes Eve the minimalist winter just around the corner.Have a creative weekend

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/17/2021 12:20:00 PM

Hello Eve Roper, we are in our last week of summer. it is a humid day here in Canada. the leaves are slowly changing colors. I am not a fna of winter. Hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/17/2021 10:03:00 AM

Our fall is very short. Soon it will be cold. Hugs.