Eve Roper Poet Free verse

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Hello September

September, I welcome your brand new moon,
Fun autumn color changes that occur
Blessing new seeds to fulfill new fruit soon
Falling in love with autumn cool breeze that does stir

Sounds of strumming strings unfurl brittle limbs
A uninterrupted breeze, a soothing kiss  amber leaves crowd
Enchanting they fall round and round with wings
Life elegance amongst scribble crayoned clouds

With first breath, the wakeful light of dawn days
Departing summer amid cooler nights
Spirit's pureness admires and sings praise
Losing oneself in serenity of the dim sky's sight

Remember September as Fall enters
Passionately and unhurried moon veils the sky
Surrendering to hints of cool winter

9/17/2021
Sponsored by:	Mystic Rose Rose
Contest Name	HELLO SEPTEMBER

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Brian Sambourne October 12, 2021 at 10:22 PM Such grand, original phrasing here like "Life...amongst scribble crayon clouds." Exceptionally creative. Truly, an enjoyable posting to read! Brian

Caren Krutsinger September 20, 2021 at 11:37 AM This would have been more than enough "With first breath, the wakeful light of dawn days Departing summer amid cooler nights Spirit's pureness admires and sings praise Losing oneself in serenity of the dim sky's sight" to make a magnificent poem Eve

Richard Lamoureux September 20, 2021 at 7:13 AM What a great entry, I expect this will do well. Thanks as well for your kind visit and comment on my latest poem. ;0) Eve Roper September 20, 2021 at 9:09 AM Hello Richard , it got N/A

Malabika Ray Choudhury September 20, 2021 at 6:54 AM "Passionately and unhurried moon veils the sky Surrendering to hints of cool winter" - beautiful lines I will repeat in my mind! Enchanting poem - as enchanting as September is! To my faves. Love ~ Mala

Demetrios Trifiatis September 20, 2021 at 4:28 AM Phantasmagoric imagery, dearest Eve! Blessings!

David Walker September 19, 2021 at 12:40 PM Beautiful imagery Eve. I love autumn

Andrea Dietrich September 19, 2021 at 11:37 AM beautiful poetry, Eve. I loved the inventive line about the scribbled crayoned clouds. That was so cool!

Anitha Jayasankar September 18, 2021 at 11:08 PM Such a beautiful write on Fall dear Eve... "Falling in love with autumn cool breeze that does stir"... loved this line... Have a lovely day.. Best wishes and hugs... ~ Ani

Quoth Theraven September 18, 2021 at 4:10 PM Eve, This hello to autumn, how magnificent. True beauty's kiss shines through in your poem's call to dance, before the long winter sets in. -Richard

Vijay Pandit September 18, 2021 at 7:36 AM Enjoyed the tenor of your verses, Eve, welcoming September, weaving in anticipation of colorful autumn. All the best.

Brian Strand September 18, 2021 at 1:12 AM Ah yes Eve the minimalist winter just around the corner.Have a creative weekend

Darlene De Beaulieu September 17, 2021 at 12:20 PM Hello Eve Roper, we are in our last week of summer. it is a humid day here in Canada. the leaves are slowly changing colors. I am not a fna of winter. Hugs

Victor Buhagiar September 17, 2021 at 10:03 AM Our fall is very short. Soon it will be cold. Hugs.