Hello Love

Hello Love, how are you doing today?
Me? The same as yesterday.
Although there remains sorrow,
I reach for tomorrow.
Hello Love, will you please pass my way?

Oh Love, I met an old friend the other day.
Like old times, I knew just what to say.
Why were you not there?
I believe you lack any care.
Hello Love, will you please pass my way?

Each time I call Love with you that I fall.
A feeling so strong how can you be so wrong?
I know it is a shame but Love you are to blame.
How can Love be so blind?

Sorry Love, I should never talk this way.
It is not personal, I do hope you stay.
Why must you go?
You just got here, you know?
So long Love, please come back to me someday.
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Contest Entry: A Conversation
Date Judged: 09/05/2016
Result: NA

Contest 2: Take the Dagger from My Heart, Please 2
Sponsor: Broken Wings
Result: 2nd Place
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 10/16/2016 1:44:00 PM
Jesse congratulations on your win in my contest
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Date: 10/15/2016 12:58:00 AM
soo sweet and a winning cheers to you..huggs
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Date: 9/12/2016 7:28:00 AM
Not only blind, but soundless and oblivious at times! Love is everything. She will return. Hang in there. Great writing!
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Jesse Day
Date: 9/15/2016 5:35:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 9/9/2016 4:12:00 PM
Love love this Jesse.
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Jesse Day
Date: 9/11/2016 8:12:00 AM
Thank you, Charmaine
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