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Hello Good-Bye

Sitting on a bench hearing crickets at the edge of the bay
saying goodbye but I had just said hello yet here it is leaving 
time while all those plans have been used up and a new 
itinerary has already started though really it’s the end of the
 last song of the last plan starting fresh with excitement finally 
sitting in my belly the can is packed and I have yellow 
highlighted the map with our purpose routed down through
 the mid-west states cutting across Washington to saunter 
into Pendleton in Oregon’s upper neck where we’ll slice off 
the top to Boise and say adieu to a friend’s niece in the Salt 
Lake somewhere have you ever been to the Arches National 
park as we haven’t before so there will have to be a day or 
two hanging upside down with nature’s art in the desert 
before we cross to the wilds of our southern neighbor of 
Mexico pilgrims with their big smiles and their big hearts.

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Date: 8/30/2020 4:01:00 AM
For some reason, I cannot quite explain, this has made rather an impression on me...perhaps because it reminds me of my favourite poet Ezra Pound; he would have taken out his blue crayon and edited this fine piece of writing with sweeping circles, underlines, corrections, subtle changes, arrows pointing here and there...and goodness knows what else. Then it would no longer be just an excellent narrative...it would in fact be a fantastic poem. Great prose, Jeanne. My very best wishes! :) john
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 8/30/2020 9:07:00 PM
I can see him tearing it apart and rearranging the pieces! Thanks John. :D
Date: 8/25/2020 3:08:00 PM
very cool how you plan out this western trip!! Good job here!
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 8/25/2020 6:08:00 PM
It has been so hot that the drive is really taking it out of us! but such beauty in the desert with all the canyons and cliffs...no water though! I just couldn't live around here! If you ever get a chance, go to the Arches National Park in Utah. Amazing
Date: 8/25/2020 1:36:00 PM
A beautiful write about a wonderful sounding trip. I do not hike but I love to travel. Hope you have a ton of fun. Don't forget Soup. Enjoy your tip.................
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 8/25/2020 6:06:00 PM
Never do I forget the Soup! but today I lost my mail account and it took a bit to get it back...sheeze, always something. But, yes I love to travel too. :D
Date: 8/20/2020 12:54:00 PM
WOW! Sounds like an exciting journey--so well written, Jeanne.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 8/23/2020 2:45:00 PM
Hi Vijay...we're outside of Arches now getting ready to hike for a couple of days...beautiful country!

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