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Hello Autumn, Goodbye Summer

Summer says so long as glorious autumn takes it place Less humidity and cooler nights puts smiles on our face Cloudy fall wet days give relief from the hot blazing sun Spectacular fall colors have only just wondrously begun A previously soft velvet lawn is sadly now a hoar frost crunch Squirrels dashing frantically collecting nuts for winters munch Trees boastfully showing off their multi-colorful leaves so grand While a wonderful cascading light snow beautifully coats the land Sweat glands sigh in relief as shivering becomes the norm Bracing ourselves for the transition as the seasons transform Needing gloves to keep icy fingers warm on our daily walks Observing abundant harvest displays mixed with corn stalks The shortening days lets the moon have it's grateful turn To shine in brilliance more often until summer does return 9/26/2015 ~For Shadow Hamilton's Seasonal - Poetry Contest ~

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Date: 4/28/2016 11:47:00 AM
Beautiful poem Cecilia...enjoyed...hope you are well...hugs
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Date: 11/4/2015 1:56:00 PM
Nice collection of thoughts, Cecilia. Best regards! :) john
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 11/4/2015 3:08:00 PM
Thank you John. Hugs
Date: 10/14/2015 2:51:00 PM
Your beautiful poem has reminded me why autumn is my favorite season... I enjoyed reading this very much, Cecilia! Just wonderful!
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 11/4/2015 3:09:00 PM
It's my favorite as well : ) Thank you Kelly. Hugs
Date: 10/7/2015 6:59:00 AM
Hi Cecilia. I love this poem about the changing season. Such a great time of year when autumn starts to appear. You have painted the picture so beautifully. The multi colored leaves are very beautiful here in the little town I live in. I completely enjoyed your poem, my friend....Robert.
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 10/7/2015 12:00:00 PM
Thank you Robert, where is your little town?
Date: 10/5/2015 8:57:00 AM
An excellent autumn poem this is my very dear friend, Cecilia. I am so happy that I found this precious gem to read tonight. I love it so much. Thank you so much for sharing and best wishes in the contest! Thank you so much as well for taking some of your precious time to read my monster-in-law poem and your lovely comments. I will try my best someday to be a kind of daughter-in-law to be proud of by my mother in law to be (no matter who she is ;)))). TYTYSM again! love lots and big hug, Leonora
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 10/7/2015 11:59:00 AM
Thanks so much my dear Leonora. Hugs
Date: 10/4/2015 5:39:00 PM
Great couplets and wonderful imagery! Especially loved these couplets quoted. "A previously soft velvet lawn is sadly now a hoar frost crunch Squirrels dashing frantically collecting nuts for winters munch Trees boastfully showing off their multi-colorful leaves so grand While a wonderful cascading light snow beautifully coats the land" Super 7 from me a pleasure to read!
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 10/4/2015 9:15:00 PM
Thank you Robert for awesome comment and rating. Hugs
Date: 10/1/2015 6:25:00 PM
Your thoughts come alive in the reader's mind, and we too can appreciate a world filled with nature's awesome presence as Summer’s cooling touch summons Autumn to come paint the trees with vibrant splashes of color, awaiting winter’s kiss of death. Well written. Emile.
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 10/2/2015 1:44:00 PM
Thanks Emile for the wonderful comment. Hugs
Date: 10/1/2015 7:03:00 AM
Oh, so lovely! No wonder this got such a high placement. Loved how the lines flow as you describe the seasonal change. 7 hugs!
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 10/2/2015 1:43:00 PM
Thank you Kim, glad you liked. Hugs
Date: 9/30/2015 11:15:00 AM
Cecilia, congratulations on your wonderful win. SKAT LOVE
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 9/30/2015 1:40:00 PM
Thank you Skat. Hugs
Date: 9/30/2015 11:03:00 AM
Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Great couplets..Sara
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 9/30/2015 1:40:00 PM
Thank you Sara. Hugs
Date: 9/29/2015 11:48:00 PM
Lovely poem Cecilia, full of wonderful images! Congrats on big win!
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 9/30/2015 1:40:00 PM
Thank you Dr Upma
Date: 9/29/2015 8:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your lovely winning poem Cecilla. Cheers, Connie
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 9/30/2015 1:39:00 PM
Thank you Connie
Date: 9/29/2015 7:11:00 PM
lovely poem Cecilia super flow congrats on placing hugs
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 9/30/2015 1:39:00 PM
Thank you Shadow. Hugs
Date: 9/29/2015 4:31:00 PM
such wonderful imagery Cecilia many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 9/30/2015 1:38:00 PM
Thank you Jan. Hugs
Date: 9/26/2015 3:24:00 PM
Enjoyed this delightful poem in rhyme, Cecilia. Summer here in Malta has been long and hot. Looking forward to cooler weather now that autumn has arrived. ~ hugs // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 9/26/2015 5:21:00 PM
Born and bred here, Cecilia:) Only a small island, but has an abundance of history!
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 9/26/2015 4:18:00 PM
Thank you Paul.....have you always lived in Malta? It's beautiful place, only seen pictures. Hugs
Date: 9/26/2015 3:13:00 PM
Very well crafted. Makes one feel the change of the seasons and must say I am not looking forward to snow. Good luck in the contest. Blessings Edith
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 9/26/2015 4:19:00 PM
Thanks Mama Bear ....I'd be happy with just snow at Christmas time. Hugs
Date: 9/26/2015 2:22:00 PM
- A wonderful poem, Cecilia - Autumn is here, but I am not ready for winter yet :) - Good luck in the contest - Best wishes for a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 9/26/2015 4:19:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise....neither am I! Hugs
Date: 9/26/2015 12:21:00 PM
Loved the bit about the winter's munch! :) More power to those little guys...Lovely, my dear. Good luck in the contest. Hugs
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 9/26/2015 1:54:00 PM
Thanks Eileen. Hugs

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